Wisdom

Mirror sestet.

Commotion in the middle of a calm ocean,
Ocean so deep thoughts creating commotion,
alone afraid drowning thoughts condone,
Condone the unacceptable to die alone,
Inundated by extreme high emotions created,
Created expressions the brain is inundated,

Empower thinking like the food we devour,
Devour positives discard negatives to empower,
Deep in thought, memories for us to keep,
Keep happiness within our hearts so deep,
Telling of truths to encourage without rebelling, 
Rebelling against wrongs great wisdom telling,
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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December 16, 2016 at 4:48 PM
Nicely crafted Roy. I enjoyed this poem and the style in which it was written, I had never seen this before.
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December 16, 2016 at 5:10 PM
Thank you Chris, this is the only one I have attempted but really enjoyed writing it and pleased you did.
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