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Wiping Out Pollen

WIPING OUT POLLEN There was a young man from Marietta. With the pollen, he had a vendetta. With hurricane sneeze, He shook all the trees. Then his white sleeve, force cleaned, the excreta. 4/12/2018 Viv Wigley’s Traditional Limerick Contest

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 7/3/2018 2:00:00 AM

Hello Kim … great limerick. I certainly had a chuckle - thank you - Lindsay

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/3/2018 5:40:00 AM

Thanks a bunch, Lindsay!

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/15/2018 5:29:00 PM

Funny and clever, Kim! Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/15/2018 8:52:00 PM

Thanks, Sandra!

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 4/14/2018 2:16:00 PM

Kim, I love great lims and this is a great one! Congrats on your well-deserved win and thx for commenting on mine -Bob

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2018 4:06:00 PM

Thank you :)

Eve Roper

Date: 4/14/2018 10:55:00 AM

Great funny Limerick, Kim, congratulations on your Win!!! Hugs Eve

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2018 4:07:00 PM

Hugs, Eve! Thanks!

Susan Gentry

Date: 4/14/2018 9:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this well-written limerick!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2018 4:07:00 PM

Thank you, Susan!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/13/2018 5:16:00 PM

oh my, what a picture. GOOD one, Kim. Congrats to you.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2018 5:50:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/13/2018 4:13:00 PM

Wow...this one was great and what a clever ending! Congratulations on your win Kim. I agree with Carrie. xxoo : )

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2018 5:50:00 PM

Thank you, Connie! :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/13/2018 3:39:00 PM

LOL !!! That last word is perfect !!! I would place this one much higher !! so cute ! Congrats to you !!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2018 5:51:00 PM

Thanks so much, Carrie! :)

Paul Callus

Date: 4/13/2018 3:36:00 PM

Thumbs up for the witty limerick, Kim, but thumbs down for the dirty man from Marietta:) ~ Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2018 5:51:00 PM

LOL! Thanks, Paul!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/13/2018 2:57:00 PM

Oh, I think this is one of the funniest ones, Kim. This is turning out to be a bad season for pollen. Thanks for the laugh and congrats on your win!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2018 5:51:00 PM

Thank you, Carolyn!