Kim Rodrigues Poet Limerick

Wiping Out Pollen

WIPING OUT POLLEN

There was a young man from Marietta.
With the pollen, he had a vendetta.
With hurricane sneeze,
He shook all the trees.
Then his white sleeve, force cleaned, the excreta.

4/12/2018
Viv Wigley’s Traditional Limerick Contest

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Lindsay Laurie July 3, 2018 at 2:00 AM Hello Kim … great limerick. I certainly had a chuckle - thank you - Lindsay Kim Rodrigues July 3, 2018 at 5:40 AM Thanks a bunch, Lindsay!

Sandra Haight April 15, 2018 at 5:29 PM Funny and clever, Kim! Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra Kim Rodrigues April 15, 2018 at 8:52 PM Thanks, Sandra!

Robert L. Hinshaw April 14, 2018 at 2:16 PM Kim, I love great lims and this is a great one! Congrats on your well-deserved win and thx for commenting on mine -Bob Kim Rodrigues April 14, 2018 at 4:06 PM Thank you :)

Eve Roper April 14, 2018 at 10:55 AM Great funny Limerick, Kim, congratulations on your Win!!! Hugs Eve Kim Rodrigues April 14, 2018 at 4:07 PM Hugs, Eve! Thanks!

Susan Gentry April 14, 2018 at 9:34 AM Congratulations on your win with this well-written limerick! Kim Rodrigues April 14, 2018 at 4:07 PM Thank you, Susan!

Andrea Dietrich April 13, 2018 at 5:16 PM oh my, what a picture. GOOD one, Kim. Congrats to you. Kim Rodrigues April 13, 2018 at 5:50 PM Thanks, Andrea!

Connie Marcum Wong April 13, 2018 at 4:13 PM Wow...this one was great and what a clever ending! Congratulations on your win Kim. I agree with Carrie. xxoo : ) Kim Rodrigues April 13, 2018 at 5:50 PM Thank you, Connie! :)

Carrie Richards April 13, 2018 at 3:39 PM LOL !!! That last word is perfect !!! I would place this one much higher !! so cute ! Congrats to you !! Kim Rodrigues April 13, 2018 at 5:51 PM Thanks so much, Carrie! :)

Paul Callus April 13, 2018 at 3:36 PM Thumbs up for the witty limerick, Kim, but thumbs down for the dirty man from Marietta:) ~ Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul Kim Rodrigues April 13, 2018 at 5:51 PM LOL! Thanks, Paul!

Carolyn Devonshire April 13, 2018 at 2:57 PM Oh, I think this is one of the funniest ones, Kim. This is turning out to be a bad season for pollen. Thanks for the laugh and congrats on your win! Kim Rodrigues April 13, 2018 at 5:51 PM Thank you, Carolyn!

Janice Canerdy April 13, 2018 at 1:22 PM Congrats, Kim! Janice Kim Rodrigues April 13, 2018 at 5:52 PM Thank you, Janice!

Charlie Smith April 13, 2018 at 12:18 PM Good one Kim, congratulations... Kim Rodrigues April 13, 2018 at 5:52 PM Thanks, Charlie!

Line Gauthier April 13, 2018 at 5:07 AM Congrats on your fine win, Kim. Kim Rodrigues April 13, 2018 at 5:52 PM Thanks, Line!

Jan Allison April 13, 2018 at 3:17 AM Many congrats Kim... that final line reminds me of toddlers at kindergarten lo:-) hugs jan xxl Kim Rodrigues April 13, 2018 at 5:53 PM For sure! Thanks, Jan!

Alexis Y. April 13, 2018 at 1:28 AM Lol! Kim, Good imagery. Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis Kim Rodrigues April 13, 2018 at 5:53 PM Thanks, Alexis!

Caren Krutsinger April 13, 2018 at 12:25 AM HAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHA Love it Kim! Kim Rodrigues April 13, 2018 at 5:54 PM Thanks, Caren! Heart laugh ;)