Wiping Out Pollen

WIPING OUT POLLEN

There was a young man from Marietta.
With the pollen, he had a vendetta.
With hurricane sneeze,
He shook all the trees.
Then his white sleeve, force cleaned, the excreta.

4/12/2018
Viv Wigley’s Traditional Limerick Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 7/3/2018 2:00:00 AM
Hello Kim … great limerick. I certainly had a chuckle - thank you - Lindsay
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/3/2018 5:40:00 AM
Thanks a bunch, Lindsay!
Date: 4/15/2018 5:29:00 PM
Funny and clever, Kim! Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/15/2018 8:52:00 PM
Thanks, Sandra!
Date: 4/14/2018 2:16:00 PM
Kim, I love great lims and this is a great one! Congrats on your well-deserved win and thx for commenting on mine -Bob
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2018 4:06:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 4/14/2018 10:55:00 AM
Great funny Limerick, Kim, congratulations on your Win!!! Hugs Eve
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2018 4:07:00 PM
Hugs, Eve! Thanks!
Date: 4/14/2018 9:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this well-written limerick!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2018 4:07:00 PM
Thank you, Susan!
Date: 4/13/2018 5:16:00 PM
oh my, what a picture. GOOD one, Kim. Congrats to you.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2018 5:50:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea!
Date: 4/13/2018 4:13:00 PM
Wow...this one was great and what a clever ending! Congratulations on your win Kim. I agree with Carrie. xxoo : )
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2018 5:50:00 PM
Thank you, Connie! :)
Date: 4/13/2018 3:39:00 PM
LOL !!! That last word is perfect !!! I would place this one much higher !! so cute ! Congrats to you !!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2018 5:51:00 PM
Thanks so much, Carrie! :)
Date: 4/13/2018 3:36:00 PM
Thumbs up for the witty limerick, Kim, but thumbs down for the dirty man from Marietta:) ~ Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2018 5:51:00 PM
LOL! Thanks, Paul!
Date: 4/13/2018 2:57:00 PM
Oh, I think this is one of the funniest ones, Kim. This is turning out to be a bad season for pollen. Thanks for the laugh and congrats on your win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2018 5:51:00 PM
Thank you, Carolyn!
Date: 4/13/2018 1:22:00 PM
Congrats, Kim! Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2018 5:52:00 PM
Thank you, Janice!
Date: 4/13/2018 12:18:00 PM
Good one Kim, congratulations...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2018 5:52:00 PM
Thanks, Charlie!
Date: 4/13/2018 5:07:00 AM
Congrats on your fine win, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2018 5:52:00 PM
Thanks, Line!
Date: 4/13/2018 3:17:00 AM
Many congrats Kim... that final line reminds me of toddlers at kindergarten lo:-) hugs jan xxl
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2018 5:53:00 PM
For sure! Thanks, Jan!
Date: 4/13/2018 1:28:00 AM
Lol! Kim, Good imagery. Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2018 5:53:00 PM
Thanks, Alexis!
Date: 4/13/2018 12:25:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHA Love it Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2018 5:54:00 PM
Thanks, Caren! Heart laugh ;)
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