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Wiped Scars-Sg

Sinking beauty of sadness sun’s hue leaves my day twilight rays make a painting of life new from gray. Night stars sparkle bright silver dust spreads on sorrow wipe scars with delight. June 24, 2021 Syllable count checked on HMS Rhyme checked on RZ Contest : Seguidilla Sponsor : William Kekaula

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/11/2021 8:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. I enjoyed it. Enjoy your win/Sunday with blessings.............

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 7/9/2021 9:57:00 PM

WoW! Night vanquishing sadness. First time heard this usually it's opposite. Congratulations on your well deserved

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/9/2021 6:30:00 PM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, with your delightful conclusion, vanquishing sadness. God bless you.

Hilo Poet

Date: 7/9/2021 4:17:00 PM

Quite a beautiful image, Subimal, your expressions are vivid and meaningfully inscribed my friend, thank you for your participation and your honorable placement, Aloha!