Written, April 13, 2025 For The Contest, “Write Eleven Beautiful Lines” Sponsor, Constance La France
“So fickle are Earth weather schemes; help Winter steal Springtime's new dreams.” _by Poet Rose yesterday to a surprise- an April snowstorm filled the night; could not believe my gaping eyes- as scenes turned white from green. The daffodils were a sad sight as if praying the Sun will rise- bent over from their frosty plight. Today, the Sun restored their prize- they stand up tall with great delight; forgetting when snow filled the skies- as scenes turned white from green. >
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