Winterwear

cold-cling of Winter
wrapped in sweaters, wound in scarves —
fashion for snowmen

11/15/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Marc Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 9:47 AM
Lovely haiku with a perfect final line ~ enjoyed reading your quotes and poetry. Thank you :)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 10:21 AM
Thank you PM!
Hoffman Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 8:16 AM
A very cleverly written haiku, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 1:43 PM
Thank you, Franci!
Wolf Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 10:28 AM
Very, very cute. I really should stop dressing my snowmen in hand-me-downs. lol. :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 5:56 PM
Must we put masks on them now too...oh boy. Thanks for the cute comment! I want to build a snowman.
Golden Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 3:32 PM
My...my I like this Haiku poem very much so,only because it possesses imagery, clarity, simplicity, color voice and tone. Nice stuff. I would love to see you create something from one of my poems - just to see your creative talent. Keep on sharing here
Roy Avatar
February 8, 2020 at 9:43 PM
Very good Haiku. Nicely expressed. Liked it. God bless you.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 8, 2020 at 10:47 PM
Thank you, Pratap!
Staton Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 7:04 AM
Very well written!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 7:06 AM
Thank you, Valerie!
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 8:33 PM
Hello Kim, yes that would be a fashion for the snowmen. Have a nice evening my friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 8:59 PM
Thanks, Darlene!
Braun Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 4:00 PM
Very playful... thank you.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 6:00 PM
Thank you :)
Green Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 5:20 PM
Hey Kim, congrats on POTD.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 9:01 PM
Thanks!
Michaels Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 11:29 AM
Great imagery, Kim - and congrats on PotD! Regards, John.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 11:39 AM
Thank you, John! :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 9:44 PM
I just adore seeing snowmen or women. There is much joy in making one. Your haiku is delightful Kim. Congratulations on having this poem honored for POTD! : ) xxoo
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 1:55 PM
Thank you, Connie! So glad you liked this one! :)
Kitchin Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 8:42 PM
Love it, congratulations on POTD!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 1:56 PM
Thank you, Tania!
Duet Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 3:55 PM
Hi Kim! This is so clever and short...the beauty of a haiku shines in this one. And, congrats on getting POTD.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 1:58 PM
Thank you for your sweet comment, Carole! :)
Nicole Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 12:37 PM
And when it is ohhh soooo cold, yes- this attire is very fitting indeed. :) This Haiku warms the entire being. Congratulations Kim, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 1:59 PM
Stay warm, Brandy! Thanks so much! :)
Wanter Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 11:51 AM
Wonder if keeping a snowman warm melts him. Very cute haiku.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 2:00 PM
One of those “cool” questions, Sunlite! :) Thank you!
La France Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 9:28 AM
Kim, congratulations on POTD with this lovely poem ~
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 2:01 PM
Thank you, Constance! :)
Gondolf Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 9:00 AM
Nicely written, Kim, much imagery packed into three line. Congrats on POTD. John
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 2:01 PM
Thank you so much, John!
Roper Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 8:59 AM
very good, congratulations on POTD
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 2:06 PM
thank you, Eve! :)
Ashley Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 8:52 AM
An excellent winter haiku, Kim. A harbinger of what’s to come.. I happen to love snow and snowmen.. or snowpersons.. :)) Congratulations for your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 2:08 PM
Snowmen worked better for the haiku :) Of course we are all mankind. Thanks so much,Susan!
Raven Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 8:48 AM
Hi Kim, love the content. Congratulations on your mush deserved Poem Of the Day honour. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 2:08 PM
Thank you, Mike! :)
May Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 8:43 AM
Love the last line..Congrats on POTD Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 2:09 PM
Thank you, Joseph! :)
Andresen Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 7:54 AM
- Congratulations with your winter haiku, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 2:09 PM
Hugs to you, Anne-Lise! Thank you!
Awtry Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 7:43 AM
very cool ;) congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 2:10 PM
Tha nk you, P.S.! Stay warm!
Pandit Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 7:35 AM
Congrats Kim on poem of the day.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 2:12 PM
Thank you, Vijay! :)
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November 17, 2018 at 7:35 AM
Oh Kim this is SO GOOD! I love it! A fave :))) Congratulations on a fantastic POTD! xomo
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 2:11 PM
Thank you, Maureen! Surprised!
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