Kristina Whitmore Poet Couplet

Winters Scent

Fall day ends drifting an off shore winters ocean breeze
Salted sea scented air mixed with the freshly fallen wilted leaves

Evening time where dusky sky merges blues to purple pinks
Sunset shifts cloudless daydreaming snowy mountain peaks

Cold incense inhaled chilled exhale as moon rises sun is spent
Climates seasonal shifting the relentless winds wintery scent

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Richard Evans December 2, 2017 at 11:24 AM I like the rhythm of this poem. It feels staccato when you say the words out loud. You have gone deep into the poets toolbox on this one and that is good. Kristina Whitmore December 2, 2017 at 5:41 PM Yes this was a fun and unique write that took my senses of a winter time into a dream escape. I am a snow bunny at heart so enjoyed the different ways of introducing feeling as well as scent. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment Richard!

Gregory Richard Barden December 1, 2017 at 10:58 PM Very nice imagery, Kristina, that floods the senses with color and aromas ... beautiful! Enjoyed it very much! Kristina Whitmore December 2, 2017 at 1:18 AM Thanks for your comment and taking the time to enjoy this short nature influenced write!

John Gondolf November 30, 2017 at 10:57 AM Beautiful imagery, Kristina, nicely done. John Kristina Whitmore November 30, 2017 at 12:55 PM Appreciate the comment John. Thanks for stopping by to read.

Silent One November 30, 2017 at 6:23 AM Three great couplets with good rhyme and flow and great imagery... Kristina Whitmore November 30, 2017 at 12:54 PM I tried something new and short which has me proud of this small write. Thanks Silent One for your comment.

James Inman November 30, 2017 at 5:19 AM A very sensory, image filled write Kristina. Kristina Whitmore November 30, 2017 at 12:54 PM Thanks James for your comment and taking the time to read this poem!

Carole Duet November 29, 2017 at 11:52 PM Lovely images in this poem, Kristina. Check your soupmail. Kristina Whitmore November 30, 2017 at 12:53 PM Thank you for reading and commenting Carole!