Winter's Pack

ivory feathers
   splayed upon the bones of fall-
             autumn requiem
  spring's phoenix, birthed of frost
       flairs it’s ice shorn wings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kendrick Avatar
December 25, 2015 at 1:44 PM
Very creative work..Congrats on this winner ..May this be the best Christmas up to this point in your life and may the ones that follow only become better..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara
Callus Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 4:14 PM
A delightful poem where imagery plays a main part. ~ Congratulations on a merited win, David. ~ May I take this opportunity to wish you all the best for Christmas and the New Year. Blessings. // paul
Gibson Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 11:24 AM
This is beautiful, David; gorgeous imagery. Congratulations.
A  Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 11:02 AM
Congrats on your win. SKAT
Onclaud Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 6:06 AM
how graceful is this, david..warm congrats and thanks for being part of my contest..huggs"
Dietrich Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 7:39 PM
wow, this is gorgeous!!! just gorgeous.
A  Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 6:20 PM
You are such an amazing poet... SKAT
Mohn Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 8:09 PM
thanks so much for the lovely comment SKAT...you are as well and will be greatly missed...I've enjoyed your many wonderful contests
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