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Winter's Night Transparency -Crystalline Waka


breathe air breathless 
mirror, I'm cold for you
our whisper crystallizes in
outside white; so my dark
warmed frosty wet

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Sara Kendrick

June 18, 2026 at 4:32 AM

Creative work you have penned in this winning work. Congratulations on your name being on the winners' list. Way to go. Sara K.

Kim Rodrigues

June 17, 2026 at 7:53 PM

Love your juxtaposition of breathe and breathless & white and dark, among other things. Congrats, Paige!

Ghairo Daniels

May 29, 2026 at 11:50 PM

Whoa ! Remarkable poetic power here. Masterful vignette on desire. It is seldom that one can articulate sensuality in an incisive way. This one achieves this. I salute !

Nette Onclaud

May 29, 2026 at 9:42 PM

scintillating read, cold and wet images blending well, paige! kindly check sponsor's rule regarding poem's title...huggs

Paige Hind

May 29, 2026 at 10:28 PM

Hey! Thanks! Without the extra to the title, I don't know if my readers will know what I am talking about, lol. I think Sotto is okay with it, he commented. Hugs :)

Terry Griffiths

May 29, 2026 at 1:43 PM

Very interesting imagery with the dark, wet warmth. The element of frost makes me think of black ice. But there is also poignant imagery of whiteness in this verse, depicted as a cold whisper. You seem to have given darkness a hug of light, making it warm despite cold surroundings.

Silent One

May 27, 2026 at 1:22 PM

Great verse..

sara Etgen-Baker

May 25, 2026 at 5:13 PM

emotionally deep and engaging. Faving.

Andrea Dietrich

May 25, 2026 at 4:52 PM

A great "cool" vibe!

Sotto Poet

May 25, 2026 at 1:25 PM

Beautiful, profound, and fascinating poem, Paige!

Victor Buhagiar

May 25, 2026 at 12:14 PM

Fascinating poem. Best for a win.

Valsa George

May 25, 2026 at 9:09 AM

Well done my friend. Wish you all the best

Kim Rodrigues

May 25, 2026 at 4:15 AM

Makes me think of the Snow Queen…those first two lines like a conversation between the animate and inanimate. The whisper disappearing…every word to leave one breathless…fave

Winter's Night Transparency -Crystalline Waka

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