Winter's Guests

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                                This chill
                                'fore me
                     collides with mine flesh

                               full of life
                            ingenuous life
                         'gainst mine flesh

                     In the wrap of the cabin 
                  with the hearth just kindling
               and our hearts and flesh tingling
                             close 'gainst
                     the rough of mine chest  
                              her breasts
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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April 3, 2014 at 3:45 AM
A reawakening of warmth in winter's chill. You are a grace from an era in time that no longer exists, especially in the male of the species. Oh, if more were like you!
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July 25, 2013 at 6:01 AM
nice , kinda reminds me of my Sweet Ecstasy, you have a great day ;}
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March 6, 2013 at 8:43 PM
I could tell this is yours without the name, you have that special way of making blood run a bit faster!
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February 6, 2013 at 9:54 AM
Kind of a shivering-hot sensual joy to this one. I like it lots. Love, daver
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February 1, 2013 at 4:40 PM
Very passionate work..Right now I think that kindling would have to be ignited here for it has turned cold..Enjoyed reading ...Thanks for stopping by..I am glad that my work was inspiring for you?..Sara
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February 1, 2013 at 1:28 AM
A very sensual classy poem James.How wonderful to read your poems once Few days ago i asked andrea about you and other poets who stopped writing.I hope you and Noah are doing well James..Charma
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May 26, 2021 at 7:02 PM
*I meant...*winks* Much love, james
Chircop Avatar
February 1, 2013 at 1:41 AM
Imeant once again not once:)
Wesley Avatar
January 29, 2013 at 6:37 PM
Is this what you've been doing in this looooong absence James. How I miss you and these seductive prods by your pen. Yesss, nobody does it like you! Love, Elizabeth
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January 24, 2013 at 4:18 PM
very nice,James. Lots of guys would love those kind of guests!! hey. long time no see!!!
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January 16, 2013 at 6:49 PM
the cure for the common cold.
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