Winter's Deep Woods

A pine branch dangles 
over a heap of leaves that
had fallen in Fall;
every morning, sunlight rays
reach down to kiss the cold snow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 7:38 AM
Congratulations on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's "Forest Lights" contest Andrew. Love, Carol
Bauer Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 3:50 PM
i like the kiss and the dangling pine branch. very descriptive! congrats on your win!
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May 19, 2012 at 10:48 PM
Congrats on your win Andrew! I love your poem and how you described the scene. Beautiful! Blessings and Love, Rhonda
Freeman Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 9:16 PM
Like this Tanka, Andrew, the last line is quite unique. Congrats on a worthy win, Agape, Moses
Johnson Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 6:29 PM
Congratulations David on your beautiful tanka and win. Joyce
Williams Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 12:33 PM
Andrew congrats on your win..David
Devonshire Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 10:39 AM
Andrew, I just love the thoght of sun rays kissing the cold snow. Beautiful imagery throughout your poem. Alexa and I congratulate you on your win! Love, Carolyn
Horsman Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 3:40 PM
Like this Tanka, Andrew, especially the last line. harry
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