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Winter's Cold

winter's cold water
stained brown runs swollen away....
solid gray clouds hang

weatherwinterhaiku

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 3/4/2015 7:04:00 AM

the cold weather goes well it's effect on the trees.. great imagery and impact congrats on being poem of the day! :) thanks for visiting my poem. been busy // olive eloisa

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/3/2015 6:03:00 PM

Dear Sara, I know you have been enduring a harsh winter, but temperatures are warming up a bit now. I enjoyed the imagery in your haiku, especially the gray hinging clouds. Also this reminded me of how you refreshed your birdbath throughout the winter. You have a beautiful heart and work very effectively in the haiku form. Love, Carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/3/2015 6:04:00 PM

Poet of the day! Wow, what a great honor! Well-deserved.

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/3/2015 6:03:00 PM

And thanks for explaining to me about Princess. I really did think that was her photo ;D

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 3/2/2015 5:26:00 AM

Excellent haiku. Great imagery. Enjoyed. Tfs

Eve Roper

Date: 3/1/2015 8:59:00 PM

Congratulations on Poem of the Day, Sara. A 7 for a very descriptive right on such few words. Blessings dear friend

Peter Lewis Holmes

Date: 3/1/2015 6:32:00 PM

Neat, grey and dirty...i enjoyed this ...thanks Sara...Peter

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/1/2015 5:01:00 PM

an excellent haiku with great imagery, Sara...I can visualize this gray, winter day...congrats on being chosen TPOD! Hugs,Rhonda

Jan Allison

Date: 3/1/2015 4:42:00 PM

you painted a great image Sara - congrats on poem of the day:-) Hugs Jan xx

David Meade

Date: 3/1/2015 4:06:00 PM

Back again -- I liked it even more today!! Congrats . . .

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 3/1/2015 12:32:00 PM

solid gray clouds hang ...oh great Sara. Love...Rajat

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/1/2015 10:17:00 AM

Hi Sara. Love your haiku. Congratulations on your POTD! :D Kim

Casarah Nance

Date: 3/1/2015 10:11:00 AM

Grats on being featured as poem of the day Sara :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/1/2015 10:07:00 AM

Hooray for you, Sara. A perfect Poem of the Day for the March awakening !!

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/1/2015 8:21:00 AM

Lovely Haiku, Sara, and a perfect image for our weather now. Congratulations on your poem being chosen Poem of the Day. Hugs, Sandra

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/1/2015 8:15:00 AM

- Congratulations, dear Sara :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Janet Eaton

Date: 3/1/2015 6:57:00 AM

Congratulations Sara on poem of the day. Perfectly describes our weather. Wishing for spring. Janet

Tim Smith

Date: 3/1/2015 6:29:00 AM

Wonderful haiku Sara....the brown color must be from gathering soil, leaves, and sticks left from a harsh winter

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/1/2015 4:51:00 AM

Excellent! Congratulations, dear Sara!

Nathan D.

Date: 3/1/2015 2:52:00 AM

very cool haiku.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 2/28/2015 3:07:00 PM

rain so essential yet a menace when we get either too much or not enough Sara superb haiku hugs 7

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/28/2015 2:38:00 PM

your change of hues tell of a season's approach , sara... beautifully done!.. huggs

David Meade

Date: 2/28/2015 11:58:00 AM

This may seem strange but I love the browns and grays . . . hanging clouds, the power of rushing water -- cold dampness . . . it hints of coming spring -- I love the haiku dearest Sara, 7 and a fav for me.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 2/28/2015 9:10:00 AM

Your words make me feel the chill of winter which I am watching from my window as the snow keeps falling.

Constance La France

Date: 2/28/2015 6:59:00 AM

Sara, oh you captured winter well, I am weary from it here in my little part of Canada, excellent haiku and thanks for visiting my poem Oh Spring . . .

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/28/2015 6:37:00 AM

- Picture perfect, Sara - I wish you a great weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)