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winter's cold water stained brown runs swollen away.... solid gray clouds hang

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/4/2015 7:04:00 AM
the cold weather goes well it's effect on the trees.. great imagery and impact congrats on being poem of the day! :) thanks for visiting my poem. been busy // olive eloisa
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Date: 3/3/2015 6:03:00 PM
Dear Sara, I know you have been enduring a harsh winter, but temperatures are warming up a bit now. I enjoyed the imagery in your haiku, especially the gray hinging clouds. Also this reminded me of how you refreshed your birdbath throughout the winter. You have a beautiful heart and work very effectively in the haiku form. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/3/2015 6:04:00 PM
Poet of the day! Wow, what a great honor! Well-deserved.
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Date: 3/3/2015 6:03:00 PM
And thanks for explaining to me about Princess. I really did think that was her photo ;D
Date: 3/2/2015 5:26:00 AM
Excellent haiku. Great imagery. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 3/1/2015 8:59:00 PM
Congratulations on Poem of the Day, Sara. A 7 for a very descriptive right on such few words. Blessings dear friend
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Date: 3/1/2015 6:32:00 PM
Neat, grey and dirty...i enjoyed this ...thanks Sara...Peter
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Date: 3/1/2015 5:01:00 PM
an excellent haiku with great imagery, Sara...I can visualize this gray, winter day...congrats on being chosen TPOD! Hugs,Rhonda
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Date: 3/1/2015 4:42:00 PM
you painted a great image Sara - congrats on poem of the day:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/1/2015 4:06:00 PM
Back again -- I liked it even more today!! Congrats . . .
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Date: 3/1/2015 12:32:00 PM
solid gray clouds hang ...oh great Sara. Love...Rajat
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Date: 3/1/2015 10:17:00 AM
Hi Sara. Love your haiku. Congratulations on your POTD! :D Kim
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Date: 3/1/2015 10:11:00 AM
Grats on being featured as poem of the day Sara :)
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Date: 3/1/2015 10:07:00 AM
Hooray for you, Sara. A perfect Poem of the Day for the March awakening !!
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Date: 3/1/2015 9:05:00 AM
Perfect POTD Sara ..... Your little Haiku , describing this 1st day of March perfectly !!! Congratulation on POTD ...... Bev :)
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Date: 3/1/2015 8:21:00 AM
Lovely Haiku, Sara, and a perfect image for our weather now. Congratulations on your poem being chosen Poem of the Day. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/1/2015 8:15:00 AM
- Congratulations, dear Sara :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/1/2015 6:57:00 AM
Congratulations Sara on poem of the day. Perfectly describes our weather. Wishing for spring. Janet
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Date: 3/1/2015 6:29:00 AM
Wonderful haiku Sara....the brown color must be from gathering soil, leaves, and sticks left from a harsh winter
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Date: 3/1/2015 4:51:00 AM
Excellent! Congratulations, dear Sara!
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Date: 3/1/2015 2:52:00 AM
very cool haiku.
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Date: 2/28/2015 3:07:00 PM
rain so essential yet a menace when we get either too much or not enough Sara superb haiku hugs 7
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Date: 2/28/2015 2:38:00 PM
your change of hues tell of a season's approach , sara... beautifully done!.. huggs
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Date: 2/28/2015 11:58:00 AM
This may seem strange but I love the browns and grays . . . hanging clouds, the power of rushing water -- cold dampness . . . it hints of coming spring -- I love the haiku dearest Sara, 7 and a fav for me.
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Date: 2/28/2015 9:10:00 AM
Your words make me feel the chill of winter which I am watching from my window as the snow keeps falling.
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Date: 2/28/2015 6:59:00 AM
Sara, oh you captured winter well, I am weary from it here in my little part of Canada, excellent haiku and thanks for visiting my poem Oh Spring . . .
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Date: 2/28/2015 6:37:00 AM
- Picture perfect, Sara - I wish you a great weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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