Winter's Breath

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contest... A Vine in Winter... sponsor Craig Cornish

My heart won't cling to you like a vine
    holding on, wrapped around
yet,  like a vine that felt your winter's breath
my rich garden of tendrils turned brown
    as the stem of love died
the trestle of my heart is bare and wanting
stripped of flowers and leaves,  crumbled
    cast to earth
I'll unwind my dead tendrils
and leave your empty trestle to another
where your winter's breath is waiting

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Date: 3/4/2025 3:14:00 AM
'where your winter's breath is waiting' amazing thought dear poet. congratulations on your win. cheers!!!
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Date: 3/4/2025 1:47:00 AM
Wonderful and so sensitive, congratulations
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Date: 2/14/2025 4:59:00 PM
This is truly beautiful. I don't know how to pick apart my fav lines; but it's in my favs anyway! :)
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Date: 2/9/2025 10:31:00 AM
Frederic, dear friend, dear poet, the dying vine perfectly expresses the feeling of a withered love; the loss and the decision to detach "unwind". Coldness in a garden of love burns the feelings to turn brown and decay, "flowers and leaves, crumbled/ cast to earth". You capture this heartbreak and resignation with poetic finesse and a hint of what's to come for the next unfortunate lover in the wings. Love that last line! Your golden pen shines my inspiring friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 2/5/2025 11:51:00 AM
- A deeply sensitive poem, Frederic - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 2/5/2025 9:38:00 AM
I enjoyed the emotive, poetic expression of your poem, it was hard hitting and aimed clear. CayCay
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