Winter's Blanket

The night sky is the perfect backdrop
For a ballet of falling stars
In the form of fluffy snowflakes
Dancing on the wind sometimes bizarre

They get knitted into a blanket
Covering the ground once green and plush
Go to sleep my little seedlings
Your rebirth we need not rush

The crackling fire plays out a symphony
As I cuddle up with my love
And we watch in perfect harmony
Snowflakes plié in the skies above

The landscape transforms before our eyes
As we watch with pure delight
With hot cider to help warm our hearts
She dons her dress of virginal white

My love sleeps under the blankets
Wrapped up in my folded arms
As I continue watching the winter ballet
Mesmerized by her delicate charms

by Joe Flach, written and pposted on 11/13/2012 for the Winter's Blanket contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 12/4/2012 12:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Gail Angel's "Winter's Blanket" contest Joe. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/30/2012 8:36:00 AM
You are a true romantic..congrats on your big win..I loved the entries in this contest. BG
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Date: 11/30/2012 1:27:00 AM
Big Congratulations on this wonderful write Joe xx
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Date: 11/30/2012 12:46:00 AM
Many congrats for this wonderful win Joe.
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Date: 11/29/2012 8:48:00 PM
Joe, congratulations with your "winter's blanket" poem. A very Good and comforting image in Gail's contest. Goodnight~ always~ PD
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Date: 11/29/2012 6:48:00 PM
Exquiste as always when you write of your love of family! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/29/2012 5:18:00 PM
Lovely and romantic Joe. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/29/2012 5:08:00 PM
Great winning work..Awesome job..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 11/13/2012 1:54:00 PM
great write
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Date: 11/13/2012 11:56:00 AM
This would definitely made winter more bearable......a very scenic and beautiful write! Hugs
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