Winter's Arrival

Wrapped in the whitest of robes
An icy crown on her head
Winter makes her grand entrance 
The earth falls asleep.

11/5/15
For Heather Ober's Winter Dodoitsu contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/3/2016 10:44:00 AM
Well said and craftily illustrated. A wonderful presentation of this wonderful site. Thumbs up and a definite 7
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Date: 11/19/2015 5:38:00 PM
Winters come and winters go but this work will stand forever!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 11/17/2015 6:47:00 AM
lovely personification of winter - congrats on your win in the contest! :)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/22/2015 5:53:00 PM
Thank you, Charlotte!
Date: 11/15/2015 8:32:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go..We had our first frost this morning..The grass was coated with a chill..Thanks for the visit to do congrats..Sara
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/22/2015 5:52:00 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Date: 11/14/2015 7:49:00 AM
Kim, Congratulations on your "Winter Dodoitsu Win." Luv SKAT
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/22/2015 5:51:00 PM
Thank you, SKAT!
Date: 11/14/2015 5:51:00 AM
Kim, nice one! BIG CONGRATULATIONS on the win!~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/22/2015 5:51:00 PM
Thank you, Olive!
Date: 11/13/2015 10:40:00 PM
Very unique Kim...congrats on this "royal" entry
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/22/2015 5:50:00 PM
Thank you, David!
Date: 11/13/2015 9:32:00 PM
Wonderful poem, Kim! Congrats on your top win :)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/22/2015 5:49:00 PM
Thank you, Laura!
Date: 11/13/2015 3:08:00 PM
Nice Kim, enjoyed "her grand entrance"..congrats. BG
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/13/2015 7:22:00 PM
Thank you so much, Barbara!
Date: 11/13/2015 2:49:00 PM
Lovely imagery Kim congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/13/2015 7:21:00 PM
Thank you, Jan! Appreciate it!
Date: 11/11/2015 8:08:00 PM
Nice personification. She is indeed an ice queen!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/13/2015 7:20:00 PM
Now how did my reply to Peter get sent to you? Anyways, Thank you, Andrea for stopping by!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/13/2015 7:17:00 PM
Thank you, Peter! Actually I love the cold of winter. It's snuggle weather!
Date: 11/9/2015 10:04:00 AM
Quite an imagery, Kim. Wishing you the best in the contest. hugs!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/13/2015 7:16:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim!
Date: 11/6/2015 4:00:00 PM
Reads like a winner..I dread the coldest part of winter but I know that we need it to let everything in nature rest..Thanks for stopping by..I think that an oak tree comes nearer to sprouting if you crack the acorn slightly then plant it in a pot that just put the whole desolving pot in the ground..It takes a long time when they are buried in the soil for that outer shell to decay and let the seed inside begin to sprout.,..Sara
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/13/2015 7:14:00 PM
Thank you, Sara! I know most people don't like the cold of winter, but I look forward to it every year. Of course, I've never lived anywhere it was extremely cold, like up north. I get tired of the heat and humidity of summer.
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