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Winter Wonderland Premiere Contest Winner

~  My favorite Thanksgiving memory was, quite simply, a walk at my grandparents house - I'll never forget how nature spoke to me that day about what is truly important, what I'm most thankful for.  ~ 



The snowflakes cling so softly to my eyes
          Each one a sparkling gem of frosted lace
               Their fluttered flights like silver butterflies
     Released by heaven in uncommon grace
To melt upon my lashes, warm, and trace 
          Their damp demise as rills upon my face

               I wind my way thru swaying evergreen
     That dip their limbs to bow a silent plea
Like Currier and Ives, they paint a scene
          Of lofty grand cathedrals, soaring free
               A vault of stars to crown each regal tree
     While high above an owl questions me

I wonder if, like me, he haunts the night
          Divining purpose deep within the wood
               So grateful for the gifts within his sight
     And all that heaven brings us that is good
In that, we forge a blessed brotherhood
          Content to cherish living, as we should

               Thanksgiving weaves the frigid winds at hand
     To bring us both this winter wonderland.





~ 1st Place ~  in the "Thanksgiving Memory" Poetry Contest, Regina Riddle, Judge & Sponsor.

~ 1st Place ~  in the "Winter Wonderland" Poetry Contest, Emile Pinet, Judge & Sponsor.

~ This is an "Urban Sonnet", a form created by Laura Loo, a poet here at Poetry Soup. ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 11/15/2019 11:43:00 AM
A beautiful write and win. Congrats
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Date: 11/13/2019 7:57:00 PM
This is truly a wonderful write - beautifully constructed with vivid imagery that puts one right along side of you in your walk. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/13/2019 5:57:00 PM
This is a masterful write G, is this a repost I remember this somehow, better the second time, congrats on another win!
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Date: 11/13/2019 7:40:00 AM
Nicely done in Winter white and blessings. Congratulations on your top win, Greg!
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Date: 11/13/2019 7:07:00 AM
Lovely poem, Gregory. Congrats on your well deserved top win.
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Date: 11/12/2019 9:30:00 PM
WOW!!! I'm putting this under my pillow to dream on. Masterful Lonna
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Date: 11/12/2019 9:19:00 PM
Congratulations and thank you for participating. Your poem is a gem. Loved it. Blessings, Gina
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Date: 3/8/2019 9:28:00 PM
Nicely done with your 1st place win :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/8/2019 11:20:00 PM
That's very kind, Debbie - much appreciated! :-)
Date: 1/14/2019 1:17:00 AM
Beautiful, refreshingly so, from the current lot of prose verbose.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/8/2019 11:19:00 PM
Thank you so much, Aniruddha, I greatly appreciate the kind words, my friend! Blessings! :-)
Date: 1/10/2019 2:37:00 PM
Very nice. Flows well.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/8/2019 11:18:00 PM
Thank you, Valerie!
Date: 1/9/2019 6:17:00 PM
Excellent sonnet Gregory.
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Levi Johnson
Date: 1/16/2019 2:26:00 PM
Its not a sonnet.
Date: 1/8/2019 5:49:00 PM
Wonderful work!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/8/2019 7:49:00 PM
That's very kind, Claas - thank you so much! :-)
Date: 1/6/2019 9:59:00 PM
Lovely and fragile. And light.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/8/2019 7:48:00 PM
Thank you very much, Angeline, I'm pleased you liked it! Blessings! :-) <3
Date: 1/6/2019 6:26:00 PM
Congratulations for being number one on the best new poems list my friend! This is one remarkable poem! : ) xxoo
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/8/2019 7:47:00 PM
That's so kind of you to say, Connie, thank you so much, my good friend! :-) <3
Date: 1/6/2019 7:57:00 AM
great!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/8/2019 7:47:00 PM
Thank you so much! :-)
Date: 1/5/2019 12:17:00 PM
Hello Gregory, this poem is super great! As i read this poem, I saw the beauty of the snow everywhere. Have a nice day my friend.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/8/2019 7:46:00 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Darlene ... blessings! :-) <3
Date: 1/4/2019 11:19:00 PM
B E A U T I F U L <3
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/8/2019 7:46:00 PM
Thank you, Maureen!
Date: 1/4/2019 3:45:00 AM
This was beautiful, makes me think of childhood days in the snow on the outskirts of Chicago, I literally could just see this whole poem play out, great ink??
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/8/2019 7:46:00 PM
Thank you very much, Suzette, what a wonderful comment ... blessings, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 1/3/2019 11:23:00 PM
Hello my friend hello. We have a song here that goes: it was Christmas day in Kakemas ,it was 41 degrees. A dominee was praying on the tv screen, it was snowing overseas... Yea I miss you guys. I see youve become a cup collector! So proud of you. Soon I shall return briefly..
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/4/2019 2:02:00 AM
Jannie, My Good Friend, I always LOVE seeing comments from you, and knowing you're OK. I think of you and yours daily and say a prayer for life to improve. I pray you are well and safe, and hope you come back soon. Blessings, Buddy - much love and respect! :-)
Date: 1/3/2019 2:00:00 PM
Very nicely done! I submitted one, too, and agree yours is deserving of the prize. I could actually feel the cool still of the air as I read your poem. Way to go! -Cary
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/4/2019 2:00:00 AM
Oh, this is such a nice comment, Cary, and I thank you so much for your kind words ... blessings to you, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 1/2/2019 1:59:00 PM
Very Nice Poem and deserving of 1st place!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/4/2019 1:59:00 AM
Thank you very much, William, I greatly appreciate the kind words! Blessings! :-)
Date: 1/1/2019 11:49:00 AM
Lovely. Gregory. Congrats on your most deserved gold medal win.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/4/2019 1:58:00 AM
That's very kind of you, Line, thank you! :-) <3
Date: 1/1/2019 11:12:00 AM
What a beautifully formed, expressive and elegant poem. The form, rhythm, rhyme and images close to perfection.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/4/2019 1:58:00 AM
I'm so pleased you enjoyed my poem, Geoffrey, and found it worthy of such a nice comment! Blessings, Friend! :-)
Date: 1/1/2019 10:48:00 AM
Congrats Greg, this was the obvious choice, you amaze once again!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/4/2019 1:57:00 AM
You're way too kind, John, but I am so thankful that you enjoy my writing ... blessings, My Good Friend! :-)
Date: 12/31/2018 6:13:00 PM
Back again to congratulate you on your contest win, love this beautifully written poem!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/4/2019 1:56:00 AM
That's so sweet of you, Tania, thank you very much, Dear Poet! :-) <3
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