Winter With You

There is something about you and snowflakes;
they cover your eyes and body
as though they are adorning you
for a divine ceremony.
Snowflakes melt around me
when my desire for your beauty
turns into a fireball within me.
The taste of snowflakes and your kiss
is all I ever want for Christmas.

By: Teddy Kimathi
Date: 13/11/2015
Contest: Write Me A Winter Poem
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Nance Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 3:48 PM
I love it, a white robe of wonderful words that puts you on the winners list, well done.
A. Sharma Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 12:48 AM
Congrats on ur great win with this lovely write Teddy!
A. Sharma Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 12:47 AM
Congrats on ur great win with this lovely write Teddy!
Kimathi Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 4:25 AM
I appreciate your applause Dr. Upma... Thank you so much! *^_^*
A  Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 8:21 PM
Teddy, Congrats on your Winter Poem win. HUGS **SKAT**
Kimathi Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 4:23 AM
Thank you very much Skat! *^_^* <3
Allison Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 2:10 PM
delightful write Teddy - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Kimathi Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 5:04 PM
Thank you so much Jan! *^_^*
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