Winter Winds

from where does the winter wind blow? Arctic, Norway, or states below? to shower snow and winter chill, then from here to where does it go? lumps of loose snow from white trees spill, as rows of cypress climb up hill, Robins twitter their red chests out, from wooden fence near old wind mill! lone heron waits, a one leg scout, on freezing lake with coloured trout, time it will be soon to migrate, across mountain peaks far about! few floundering leaves still debate, changing seasons, their unknown fate, winter winds ensnare them in snow, to pile them amongst garden waste. dazzling winter has morning glow, how it speeds past! doesn’t it slow? from where it came we do not know, wherever it goes, let it go!!
5th Placement Written 10/10/2021 8 syllables each line aaba bbcb ccdc ddad aaaa rhyme last stanza mono rhyme Angel L V sponsored Interlocking Rubaiyat poetry contest!
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Date: 11/5/2021 8:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Winter winds" is a creative story/write. Guess winter is on it's way. I love the cool not cold winter. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/5/2021 9:00:00 AM
Thank you so much Paula! Good we share the same views!
Date: 11/4/2021 2:26:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Krish. Winter is my least favorite season, I always hope it will speed by quickly. John
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/4/2021 6:07:00 AM
Thanks John! But essential for the environment! I love parts of it, but fear most of it.
Date: 11/3/2021 5:03:00 PM
Winter can be beautiful but also dangerous, I like that you show both sides in your poem (I try to avoid snow as much as possible!) Congratulations on your win in the contest~
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/4/2021 12:51:00 AM
Thanks Michelle! who wants to be cold? If it was not for Christmas, Winter would be unbearable!
Date: 10/13/2021 3:45:00 PM
WOW! Krish, your Rubaiyat is amazing! Your word-choices and descriptions are truly fantastic! Winter is really harsh where I live, but still I particularly enjoy the serenity of snowfall. BW ~ Mala
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/13/2021 11:30:00 PM
Thanks Mala! Christmas snow is good but adds a lot of work for me afterwards!! Just enjoy the cooler weather and walks and warm food. adequate clothing is the key!
Date: 10/10/2021 9:42:00 AM
Nicely-composed and written, Krish. I enjoyed reading it, but I'm afraid I'm not a fan of winter...so, I particularly enjoyed the very last line! Good luck in the contest.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/10/2021 9:56:00 AM
Thanks Milton! I like parts of it but do not like snow as it makes my travel difficult. always look eagerly forward to February for early spring!
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