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Winter Whispers

Winter Whispers, that call and call then snowflakes kiss earth's face on fall and mountains hold out hands up tall to catch the whispers ,that call and call.

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James Inman

Date: 10/25/2017 9:15:00 AM

Jackie, another lovely short write. May I make a suggestion, if you haven't already, go into the "Forms" tab at the top and browse the different forms. It may be helpful when posting your poems. For instance "Rhyme" for this poem is correct but to be more precise "Mono-rhyme" would be more descriptive. It is also challenging to try to write poems in different Forms. Lastly, almost all "I Don't Know" poems can be listed as "Free Verse."

Jackie Elston
Date: 10/26/2017 2:11:00 PM

hi James..after looking at this poem again l realised your right, it is mono- rhyme. lv not yet worked out all the different forms yet..before l joined this site, l had no idea there was so many.l wish l was well health wise, lm missing so much from being able to interact more on here.take care. Jackie