Winter Warming

breathtaking melting  

  ice shelf floats away to sea ~

     a polar bear flees  



                  December 17, 2019
 Writing Challenge, December - Winter Haiku or Senryu
         Sponsor, Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode
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Roper Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 7:23 PM
Gershon, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Wolf Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 7:27 PM
Thank you so much for noticing, Eve! :) gw
La France Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 5:48 PM
Gershon, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with your wonderful haiku ~
Wolf Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 7:26 PM
Thank you so much, D.H., for your generous evaluation of my haiku and for sponsoring this great contest! Season's best, Gershon
Iversen  Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 9:32 AM
Cold truth. Nicely said GW-Peter
Wolf Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 2:32 PM
Like your sharp comment, Peter! Thanks! Season's best, gw
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December 25, 2019 at 2:24 PM
- Congratulations, with your winning poem - Marry Christmas and Happy New Year, Gershon :) - Greetings from // Anne-Lise :)
Wolf Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 2:42 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise. Cheers to the Scandinavian lights!! :) gw
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December 24, 2019 at 5:45 PM
NIcely done, Gershon. Congrats for your win.
Wolf Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 2:41 PM
Thank you so much Andrea! And congrats to you for your wonderful winner. You really rang the bell! Peace, Gershon
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December 24, 2019 at 12:27 PM
Our north is in a sad state, we're feeling it. I feel it in this poem, excellent penning. Happy Hanukkah my dear Gershon, warm hugs. xomo <3
Wolf Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 3:15 PM
Thanks, my dear friend. A Merry Xmas to you and yours! Warmest, Gershon
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December 18, 2019 at 6:19 PM
Cold, so cold... perfect picture of words. The world is so beautiful and ever-changing. Ann
Wolf Avatar
December 18, 2019 at 10:25 PM
And thank YOU for a beautiful comment, my friend! :) gw
Somadas Avatar
December 18, 2019 at 10:32 AM
Global warming is really an issue.. Thank you for bringing it in a captivating way..
Wolf Avatar
December 18, 2019 at 12:06 PM
Yes! Here's to less warming and a little climate luck for a change! ~ Gershon
Green Avatar
December 18, 2019 at 7:36 AM
Really nice my friend. Hoping this one finds the winner's circle.
Wolf Avatar
December 18, 2019 at 12:05 PM
Thanks for your good wishes, Chris. Cheers, Gershon
Y. Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 10:38 PM
WoW! Gershon, This is good. You painted such a great picture with words. I could see the image in my mind. It looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis
Wolf Avatar
December 18, 2019 at 12:04 PM
Thank you so much for the enthusiasm, Alexis. Here's to less climate change! :) gw
Na Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 10:24 PM
Very good one Gershon. Record breaking melting is going on. The penguins are going on strike.
Wolf Avatar
December 18, 2019 at 12:03 PM
f the penguins are on strike, wll the walruses be next?! … Stay tuned... Thanks, Greg. Here's to less change at the Poles. :) gw
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