Tucker Carwile Jr Poet Free verse

Winter Walks

Winter walks,
                                   on summer beaches,
                                 but for you and I.
                                 Marking our steps 
                                        in soft sand,
                                  that soon,
                                 the tide must wash away.
                                 
                                    

                                  Months from now,
                                     our walks will have been
                                   forgotten.

                                 Beaches crowded with bodies dressed,
                                     in summer styles.
                                   We will have become
                                        last years news.

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Shnkimmel Clarke December 1, 2014 at 11:58 AM This one hit close to home! Comforting to know I am Not alone

Shirley Long February 19, 2012 at 5:55 PM Nice poem, I enjoyed reading it.

Barbara Gorelick February 19, 2012 at 4:30 PM I really like this, "last years news" is a great line. I think I might like it better if the form wasnt all over the place...just me. Glad to meet you. , looking forward to reading more of your work. BG Tucker Carwile Jr February 19, 2012 at 5:30 PM BG, thank you so much for your comments......tucker

Anne-Lise Andresen February 19, 2012 at 4:12 PM Nicely done Tucker.....summer,soft sand and sunshine(love).....lovely. -oxox Anne-Lise Tucker Carwile Jr February 19, 2012 at 5:33 PM Anne-Lise, thank you so very much on your comment.............tucker