Winter Turning Into Springtime

l remember days of silver
turning into lakes of snow
ice crystals touch,  from stars above me
Winters shimmers,  did grow and grow.

l walked the gentle flowing rivers
when the trees stretched arms to me
l dream't your kiss , my softest wishes
as falling from the sky , to me.

There were snowflakes wings on powdered waters
but grey skies changed to snow white clouds
your love is of the calmest nightfall
your love is like the gentle shores.

As Winter surely falls to Springtime
these are words, l faithfully, write to you
never question doubts you thought of
never question

my love for you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 4/6/2025 9:55:00 AM
Hi Jacqueline that was a beautiful poem of love, wishing you and your loved one a long and happy life together.
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 4/9/2025 11:51:00 AM
Thank you John for very kind comment. J.
Date: 3/11/2025 4:23:00 PM
Dear Jacqueline, Your wonderful words flow like a gentle thaw, where love lingers in every melting snowflake and breeze of spring. I just love the softness, the faithfulness for it’s breathtaking. It carries a quiet devotion that warms the soul. Absolutely beautiful. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 3/14/2025 9:54:00 AM
What a lovely comment, thank you Daniel, that's really kind of you. As well as poem dedicated to my dear one, l love all seasons, but this Springtime in my garden i'm waiting patiently for it to wake up , as l planted a lot for my ' white moonlight' garden area that l can see from my window. Have a great weekend. ps. iv not seen any of your poems Daniel, l'll go take a look. take care. J
Date: 3/11/2025 2:30:00 AM
Springs brings up the great feelings. Great imagery.
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 3/11/2025 11:38:00 AM
Thank you Victor. J
Date: 3/10/2025 5:57:00 PM
Beautiful and romantic Jacqueline. The imagery is excellent.
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 3/11/2025 11:39:00 AM
Thank you Oliver. l enjoyed writing this one. J.
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