Winter Tides

Storm swept seas assault the shore Lashing out with rage unsated Attacking with the wrath of Thor Oceans temper unabated Reaching out with icy hands Fists of foam grip granite walls Succeeding not with it's demands Retreats to Poseidon's halls
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Scholtz Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 2:39 PM
Love it, Congratulations on your Win.
Quigley Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 10:43 PM
Thank you Elizabeth
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January 9, 2012 at 10:50 PM
Congratulation on your superb win, my friend. Loved and enjoyed your nice one. bl
Quigley Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 10:56 PM
Thanks so much bl
Arno Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 10:09 PM
Congratulations Bob on your great write. Best regards, Jon
Quigley Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 10:56 PM
Thank you sir
Dietrich Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 8:48 PM
It's so good to see your excellent poem here in the winning circle, Bob.Congratulations.
Neels Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 11:12 AM
This is a powerful write Bob, evident why it is a favorite as well.. congratulations on your first place win in Brian's contest ;)
Quigley Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 11:52 AM
Thank you Wilma
Johnson Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 9:57 AM
A very dramatic piece. I can see why it is a favorite and a winner. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Quigley Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 10:59 AM
Thanks very much Joyce
Richards Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 9:28 AM
This powerful poem is wonderful, Bob!! Well done, It brings the tide alive!! Congratulations on a well deserved win!!
Quigley Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 11:00 AM
Appreciate it Carrie
Rozario Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 8:15 AM
Love the poem Bob...Congrats.
Quigley Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 8:50 AM
Thank you Jonas
Song Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 7:51 AM
Bob, you are exceptional when it comes to writing of the ocean ....I mean it...just great images here of waves that encompassed these ocean walls. Congrats again. Gwendolen
Quigley Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 8:50 AM
Thanks so much Gwendolen. Very much appreciated
Falotico Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 7:23 AM
I love this write!!! a well deserved win my friend... Michael
Quigley Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 8:51 AM
Thanks for the kudps Michael
Brown Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 6:27 AM
Congratulations on you win in Brian's contest Bob. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 8:52 AM
Thank you Carol
Guzzi Avatar
November 28, 2011 at 4:01 PM
gotta love the use of mythogy! Norse in verse one Greek in verse 2!The main Norse sea god was Ægir, and Rán was his wife they are not as well known Congrad's on your big win! Light & Love
Quigley Avatar
November 28, 2011 at 6:19 PM
Thanks Debbie. Appreciate your comments
Konos Avatar
November 25, 2011 at 5:04 AM
Reminds me of our boating "daze".....Thank you for the amazing poetry.....it's so good to be on dry land......of plenty....best, Judy
Quigley Avatar
November 25, 2011 at 8:00 AM
No argument there Judy. Thanks for stopping by
Foster Avatar
November 24, 2011 at 6:08 PM
Congratulations Bob. The easy flow of this poem telling of the rough wild seas is intriguing... love it... Margaret
Quigley Avatar
November 24, 2011 at 10:27 PM
Much appreciated Margaret
Johnson Avatar
November 24, 2011 at 8:15 AM
lBeautifully done and congratulations on your no. 1. Love, Joyce
Quigley Avatar
November 24, 2011 at 8:36 AM
Thank you Joyce. Have a nice Thanksgiving
Dufresne Avatar
November 23, 2011 at 5:45 PM
this poem is simply outstanding Bob. No wonder it took first place. Great job of it/ Congratulations to you
Quigley Avatar
November 23, 2011 at 9:45 PM
Thanks very much Robert
Stinson Avatar
November 23, 2011 at 5:40 PM
Wow, I can see why this won. Many congratulations to you.
Quigley Avatar
November 23, 2011 at 9:46 PM
Thank you Daniel. Much appreciated
Brown Avatar
November 23, 2011 at 12:31 PM
Congratulations on your win in this contest today Bob. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
November 23, 2011 at 2:23 PM
Thank you Carol
Flach Avatar
November 23, 2011 at 11:41 AM
Nice imagery mixed with gods of yore - good rhyme, good flow, and good use of your words. Well down, Bob.
Quigley Avatar
November 23, 2011 at 12:18 PM
Appreciate it Joe. Happy Thanksgiving
Macmillan Avatar
November 1, 2011 at 7:01 AM
Hey, good stuff, this! Short and strong. Great imagery--- yeah, and what Andrea said. Cheers, Cyndi
Quigley Avatar
November 1, 2011 at 7:59 AM
Thank you Cyndi. Very kind indeed.
Brown Avatar
November 1, 2011 at 6:10 AM
Tis the first of November and the day is starting out beautiful. The poetry I am reading this morning is very diverse and should make my whole day enjoyable as I read it. Your hearts are overflowing onto your paper and makes such amazing reading. Thank you for sharing your writing with us Bob. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
November 1, 2011 at 7:59 AM
And thank you for your comments Carol.
Dietrich Avatar
October 31, 2011 at 11:52 PM
Fists of foam grip granite wall, what an excellent line of poetry!!
Quigley Avatar
November 1, 2011 at 8:01 AM
Every once in a while even a blind hog finds an acorn. Thanks Andrea
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