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Winter Tears

Whom dwell below dark skies as seasons change ~~So bitter is the winter of goodbye Inspired by Mr. Brian Strands American Poetry Doublet Double Take Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/9/2009 8:28:00 AM
Love this. Congratulations, Carrie, on your well deserved Win in Brian's contest. Love, Nigel
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Date: 1/5/2009 7:50:00 AM
Congrats Carrie & thank you for supporting my contests & for your always welcome comments.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/5/2009 7:12:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your win in Brian's contest! So well deserved! Love, Shar
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Date: 1/5/2009 4:30:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win, my dear lady!!! you rock, and this is do deep and dark, just like deep winer, well done!!!!!!!!! Love and light, Kristin
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Date: 12/31/2008 3:43:00 AM
winsome epigram!! thanks --you're an excellent writer!!
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Date: 12/26/2008 9:54:00 PM
a truly amazing doublet,, good luck in the contest,,and Thank You for reading and commenting on my poem, I am sorry I am a little late ,,,blessings..Cecil
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Date: 12/21/2008 11:34:00 PM
Sometimes the fewest words say the most. A beautiful piece! Thank you also for your kind comments. Merry Christmas. Nathaniel
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Date: 12/18/2008 9:11:00 PM
A deep, beautiful sigh in an epigram... Thank you Carrie for your comment on my poem. Have a Merry Christmas in front of a warm fire :)
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Date: 12/18/2008 4:57:00 PM
winter and good bye? a bad combination, john
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Date: 12/18/2008 4:46:00 PM
Very deep and poetic, I love the introspection you brought! Great job! Love, Amy :)
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Date: 12/17/2008 5:38:00 PM
Good luck with your lovelyy couplet. Thank you for reading ancommenting on my poem. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/17/2008 3:17:00 AM
A winner, Carrie. Beautiful, as always, it is my pleasure. love, your friend buried in ice, Kristin
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Date: 12/16/2008 7:12:00 PM
Nice poem Carrie...Raul
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Date: 12/16/2008 6:35:00 PM
Again I like this poem and tnx 4 the comment and tnx 4 praying 4 her... *Breana
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Date: 12/16/2008 12:39:00 PM
Wonderfully clever. Such deeply strring emotion lies within your words. Great write and good luck! Glad you liked my little ditty! Love Robin
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Date: 12/16/2008 10:36:00 AM
Carrie how are you my friend and neighbor - Tis that time of year and please allow me to wish you and your family a very blessed Christmas - love you hon, MJ
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Date: 12/16/2008 8:31:00 AM
So excellently captured , Carrie .. Best of luck !! ......
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Date: 12/16/2008 4:46:00 AM
I love the title of this piece Carrie. Love the imagery and the contrast. Another wonderful write Carrie.
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Date: 12/15/2008 9:12:00 PM
Its always pretty tough to bid a farewell, symbolism in your words. Good luck in the contest. Love, Chitra
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Date: 12/15/2008 5:40:00 PM
Oooh, good one. So love that second line. Good luck in the contest with this winning poem. Love, Shar
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Date: 12/15/2008 4:43:00 PM
Deep...I like *Breana
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