Carrie Richards Poet Epigram

Winter Tears

Whom dwell below dark skies as seasons change
                     
                      ~~So bitter is the winter of goodbye  












Inspired by Mr. Brian Strands American Poetry Doublet 
                                                  Double Take Contest

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Nigel Fawcett January 9, 2009 at 8:28 AM Love this. Congratulations, Carrie, on your well deserved Win in Brian's contest. Love, Nigel

Brian Strand January 5, 2009 at 7:50 AM Congrats Carrie & thank you for supporting my contests & for your always welcome comments.Rgds Brian

Sharon Winter January 5, 2009 at 7:12 AM Congratulations Carrie on your win in Brian's contest! So well deserved! Love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds January 5, 2009 at 4:30 AM Congrats on your well deserved win, my dear lady!!! you rock, and this is do deep and dark, just like deep winer, well done!!!!!!!!! Love and light, Kristin

Mc Mc December 31, 2008 at 3:43 AM winsome epigram!! thanks --you're an excellent writer!!

Cecil Hickman December 26, 2008 at 9:54 PM a truly amazing doublet,, good luck in the contest,,and Thank You for reading and commenting on my poem, I am sorry I am a little late ,,,blessings..Cecil

Nathaniel Köhp December 21, 2008 at 11:34 PM Sometimes the fewest words say the most. A beautiful piece! Thank you also for your kind comments. Merry Christmas. Nathaniel

Iolanda Scripca December 18, 2008 at 9:11 PM A deep, beautiful sigh in an epigram... Thank you Carrie for your comment on my poem. Have a Merry Christmas in front of a warm fire :)

John Loving Iii December 18, 2008 at 4:57 PM winter and good bye? a bad combination, john

Amy Swanson December 18, 2008 at 4:46 PM Very deep and poetic, I love the introspection you brought! Great job! Love, Amy :)

Joyce Johnson December 17, 2008 at 5:38 PM Good luck with your lovelyy couplet. Thank you for reading ancommenting on my poem. Love, Joyce

Kristin Reynolds December 17, 2008 at 3:17 AM A winner, Carrie. Beautiful, as always, it is my pleasure. love, your friend buried in ice, Kristin

Raul Moreno December 16, 2008 at 7:12 PM Nice poem Carrie...Raul

Breana Wiggins December 16, 2008 at 6:35 PM Again I like this poem and tnx 4 the comment and tnx 4 praying 4 her... *Breana

Robin L. Gass December 16, 2008 at 12:39 PM Wonderfully clever. Such deeply strring emotion lies within your words. Great write and good luck! Glad you liked my little ditty! Love Robin

Michael Jordan December 16, 2008 at 10:36 AM Carrie how are you my friend and neighbor - Tis that time of year and please allow me to wish you and your family a very blessed Christmas - love you hon, MJ

Sean Kelly December 16, 2008 at 8:31 AM So excellently captured , Carrie .. Best of luck !! ......

Christopher Higgins December 16, 2008 at 4:46 AM I love the title of this piece Carrie. Love the imagery and the contrast. Another wonderful write Carrie.

Chitra Lakhera December 15, 2008 at 9:12 PM Its always pretty tough to bid a farewell, symbolism in your words. Good luck in the contest. Love, Chitra

Sharon Winter December 15, 2008 at 5:40 PM Oooh, good one. So love that second line. Good luck in the contest with this winning poem. Love, Shar

Breana Wiggins December 15, 2008 at 4:43 PM Deep...I like *Breana