Winter Tale

Snow falling downwards
Starts to turn city streets white
      Eyes peer from windows 
Wide open they see the changes
We have not yet conquered nature
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Sankey- Lewis Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 2:41 PM
Interesting ending with images letting me see.
George   Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 12:25 AM
Ah!! Now this is a very creative Tanka, Matthew.
Bickerstaffe Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 7:27 PM
A very interesting piece Matthew... Mother Nature will always have the last laugh I'm sure... Well done my friend, Best wishes, Keith
Deschler Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 9:06 PM
There is no way to stop the cold winter season from arriving, so I just enjoy the beauty of the snow while it lasts... I really liked this lovely poem, Matthew. Very nicely done!
Onclaud Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 10:27 AM
splendid way of observing season's changes.. well, we will always have snow and miss it when global warning reing ; ohh hope not!... huggs
George   Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 11:34 PM
WONDERFUL TANKA, MATTHEW.
Dietrich Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 7:00 PM
I agree with Silent One. GREAT write, Matt. and don't worry. The cancer poem just my imagination. sure hope I never get that dread disease. Knocking wood at this moment.
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