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Winter Tale

Snow falling downwards Starts to turn city streets white Eyes peer from windows Wide open they see the changes We have not yet conquered nature

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Iris E. S-Lewis

Date: 3/30/2016 2:41:00 PM

Interesting ending with images letting me see.

Elaine George

Date: 2/3/2016 12:25:00 AM

Ah!! Now this is a very creative Tanka, Matthew.

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 1/31/2016 7:27:00 PM

A very interesting piece Matthew... Mother Nature will always have the last laugh I'm sure... Well done my friend, Best wishes, Keith

Kelly Deschler

Date: 1/29/2016 9:06:00 PM

There is no way to stop the cold winter season from arriving, so I just enjoy the beauty of the snow while it lasts... I really liked this lovely poem, Matthew. Very nicely done!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/29/2016 10:27:00 AM

splendid way of observing season's changes.. well, we will always have snow and miss it when global warning reing ; ohh hope not!... huggs

Elaine George

Date: 1/28/2016 11:34:00 PM

WONDERFUL TANKA, MATTHEW.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/28/2016 7:00:00 PM

I agree with Silent One. GREAT write, Matt. and don't worry. The cancer poem just my imagination. sure hope I never get that dread disease. Knocking wood at this moment.