Winter Swell

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stand at the window watch for approaching events. the surge of winter Written: October 15, 2022

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Bill Baker

Date: 10/19/2022 9:55:00 AM

I could feel the surging cold icey water. Nice Haiku, my friend. Bill P.S. catching up on the poems I've missed in my hectic life right now.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/16/2022 10:20:00 AM

This makes me feel winter's elegant caress, dearest friend, Lasaad! Be blessed!

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/16/2022 9:31:00 AM

beautiful ~ i feel the longing, the apprehension, the inevitability ~

Sotto Poet
Date: 10/16/2022 9:39:00 AM

Thank you so much for your encouraging comment, Line. So much appreciated

Valsa George

Date: 10/15/2022 9:30:00 PM

Yes, winter is at the threshold waiting to come with a surge. Beautiful haiku..