Winter Sweater

Winter sweater clings as Spring springs forward in March — hypothermic knit 3/12/2018

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Pat Adams

Date: 3/13/2018 2:28:00 PM

When will it end? Warm and then Cold. A heated topic of debate! Nice write!...pat

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/13/2018 3:17:00 PM

I am freezing today! Contemplating taking a swim in some soup!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/13/2018 10:37:00 AM

Hypothermic knit. This combination takes the reader directly back to the sweater. Nicely done.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/13/2018 10:38:00 AM

Thanks so much, Caren!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/13/2018 6:08:00 AM

I think we're all a bit fed up of the snow and cold now, bring on the sunshine. Great haiku Kim. P.S. I thought you were in sunny Florida.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/13/2018 10:38:00 AM

Not in Florida :)

Joe Dimino

Date: 3/12/2018 11:32:00 PM

Very nicely done Kim; a true art to be able to pack so much in a limited area as is the Haiku form. And yet, you seem to handle the art consistently with elegance and ease.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/13/2018 6:02:00 AM

Thanks so much, Joe!

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 3/12/2018 9:45:00 PM

Fantastic, Kim. Time for some warmer weather and sweater storage. Great thoughts molded into haiku.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/12/2018 10:03:00 PM

Thank you, Reason!

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/12/2018 8:31:00 PM

Wow! Your imagery is absolutely awesome Kim. The first line is superb. Winter is hanging on for sure. Blizzard conditions here tomorrow with 18-24'' of snow! Love your haiku!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/12/2018 8:39:00 PM

Stay warm, Susan, and thanks! Hugs...Kim