Winter Streams

LIFE’s STREAMS IN WINTER

The rivers, brooks, the winter bourns and streams
Seem all in haste, they flow in rapid course
With no time now for idle summer dreams
Compelled by purpose resolute with force

While gentle flows meandered then, no care
Nor firm direction, save to drift at ease
The waters now by constant vector bare
Implacably are drawn toward the seas

As I on my life’s woven course move on
Denying still a destination sure
I choose a path that’s not on lines pre-drawn
Nor tracked to end of dubious allure

I’ll drift at times in vales of tranquil winding
Yet disregard the banks that would be binding


25 December 2020
Winter Poetry Contest
Sponsor:Emile Pinet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 1/14/2021 3:44:00 PM
Just love the classic style you employ in this sonnet: The first 8 lines about nature; the last 6 weaving that nature into your lifestream. A pleasure and privilege to read, Geoffrey. ~ A doff of the cap, gw
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 3/19/2021 9:36:00 AM
Your comments are as always most welcome and flattering, my friend. Thank you very much.
Date: 1/7/2021 5:47:00 PM
Beautiful writing, as always! Outstanding imagery. Speaking of myself, near the end of this journey, I find myself saying, as so many others -- even after a large and eventful life serving humanity mostly -- yet, I have done nothing. Blessings my friend. You are a great poet!
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 3/19/2021 9:34:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind comments, Joe. Sorry for the delay in responding.
Date: 1/4/2021 6:32:00 AM
You travel well. ;0)
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Date: 12/30/2020 12:33:00 PM
what an interesting poem. Like the one Frost wrote but telling it YOUR way. Super fine writing, Geoffrey.
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/6/2021 3:26:00 AM
Thank you very much, Andrea.
Date: 12/25/2020 9:48:00 AM
Geoffrey, Enjoyed this poem and journey you chose. Reminds me to return to my own canals one day. Good luck and may fortune provide you with a star to steer by in the coming year. -Richard
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 12/26/2020 1:22:00 AM
Many thanks for your kind words and wishes. Blessings for the coming year to you and yours.
Date: 12/25/2020 4:13:00 AM
Dear Geoffrey, after carefully reading your poem I believe you associate with that river very much, I smile when I say this, cuz you have the markings of a true poet at heart. Thank you for sharing such a delightful sensitive poem, Merry Christmas dear poet.
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 12/25/2020 4:23:00 AM
Dear Rose, Thank you so much for your very quick response and kind words. Blessings to you and yours for a happy Christmas.
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