Winter Storm

From a distance the smoke rises and swells
Inside, fireplace cinders glow to warm
With evening dew of chilly winter smells
While creatures ready for the winter storm
Near lake shines like polished glass venting steam
Leaves have turned summer green to winter gold
Soon mountain rains will transpose slopes to cream 
Waiting for an icy season to unfold
Nuts fall hard to an inhibited ground
From brisk winds that stir limbs in firm breeze
Life scurries when hearing the constant sound
To prepare for this yearly winter freeze
All is cozily wreathed for this winter sleep
Trusting that gelid snows are not too deep

Copyright © 2010  By Caryl S. Muzzey

Fifth Place Winner ~ "Shakespearean or English Sonnet” Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: John Freeman
Nov. 9, 2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 30, 2010 at 9:54 AM
A multitude of beautiful and original imagery in this lovely sonnet, dear Caryl. Congratulations for your well deserved win too! Love, iolanda
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October 28, 2010 at 4:06 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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October 27, 2010 at 11:11 AM
Congratulations Caryl on your win in John Freeman's Sonnet contest. Love, Carol
K. Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 11:08 AM
Hi Caryl and congrats on your win with this wonderful sonnet--very vivid piece indeed! --- nikko :)
Mannan Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 9:00 PM
A beautiful sonnet Caryl. Many congratulations for this win.
Mehta Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 6:26 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Caryl
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October 26, 2010 at 6:21 PM
Caryl, Congratulations on your big win! Love, Carolyn
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October 26, 2010 at 5:50 PM
Congratulations Caryl on your success and poem's honor in it top ten placement. Agape, Moses
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October 26, 2010 at 5:50 PM
Congrats Caryl on your winning poem in Moses contest with this excellent entry luv.. enjoy another sweet victory tonight for a wonderful poem my friend..
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October 10, 2010 at 10:52 AM
Wonderful imagery Caryl. I can picture the animals scurrying to their safe places awaiting the wrath of winter. Good luck in John's contest >> James
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October 10, 2010 at 10:51 AM
It sounds like you really know how to enjoy a winter storm snuggling up by the fire. Very descriptive sonnet, Caryl. John will love it! So do I. Love, Carolyn
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