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Winter Stance Minichu

Now a hollow cloud I remember Drops me from so high— Melts off this forever. My red in the thermometer's glass— For I to ghost's gloom run By mercury's clairsentience. The frost's white blush— A green blossom thud; Winter withstood. Now a hollow cloud I remember For I to ghost's gloom run; Winter withstood.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/1/2024 9:59:00 AM

Wow you sure do love Minichu and this is one of your best, Paige.

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/15/2023 5:53:00 AM

Paige, your rhyme poem captivated my senses. Winter, a season bereft of warmth, is one I have long harbored disdain for, and thus, your verses resonated deeply within me.

Ink Empress

Date: 11/14/2023 8:44:00 AM

What a freezinhly brilliant write this is dear talented soul. Your way with expressing has a unique and original voice that i truly admire, and i especially love the line “ Now a hollow cloud I remember“ this line hits deep for me truly. And also “ The frost's white blush—A green blossom thud;“ brilliant descriptive wordplay. Sending you some sun, its scorching hot here today. Although my heart is freezing lol always enjoy reading you

Silent One

Date: 11/14/2023 1:26:00 AM

Great use of form..

Mat Ignacio

Date: 11/13/2023 7:31:00 PM

a deep and complex weaving worth a few reads over -

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/13/2023 6:08:00 PM

Ooh…a ghostly cold…I feel the temperature dropping! Hugs ~ Kim