Winter Sonata

Oh, my wondrous winter rose!
I live to see you bloom in all your charming chilling grace.
Awaiting your pearly presence to embellish my arctic stance stilled in mystic motion,
where my frosted saccharine soul craves only your ethereal embrace to cast a spell of life.
Although distance divulges myriad of yearnings in vacant vermillion veins,
yet I am willing to weave scintillating seconds in a rosary of tears upon my eyelashes,
till I see you glistening at the edge of every silver splashed storm.
I long to press velvety warmth to your glacial glazed petals with my devoted touch,
as I know how I can comfort pink pastels present somewhere deep in your snow-kissed soul.
Lost and found in each other's gaze, 
you and I would tango upon twilight tinted tundras for winters to come.
I dream of us together wrapped under the blanket of icy indigo nights,
where our jasmine scented saga would hymn in our rhyming dewy breaths pouring in majestic monophony.

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Date: 12/7/2023 1:44:00 PM
This is a lovely poem.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest
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Ayesha Iqbal
Date: 12/8/2023 12:59:00 AM
Thank you so much brother! Congratulations to you too!!
Date: 12/7/2023 9:07:00 AM
Back with hearty congratulations on your top winning placement in my contest. Blessings
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Ayesha Iqbal
Date: 12/8/2023 12:59:00 AM
Thank you so much for placing me among such a talented lot!! So honored! Blessings on you too!
Date: 12/5/2023 8:26:00 AM
This poem is truly captivating with its exquisite imagery and seamless composition. Its optimistic tone and the celebration of beauty with the winter flower are so profound. Emotions were conveyed deeply heartfelt and the sincerity in your expression, is truly remarkable. Best wishes for the contest
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Ayesha Iqbal
Date: 12/6/2023 8:13:00 AM
Thank you so much for your thoughtful feedback!!
Date: 12/5/2023 7:10:00 AM
Ah I can feel the longing and love emanating through this profound and poetic write. Love how you’ve also used jasmine, ah, i love the wintry imagery and flow of your well articulated lines: this poem resonates on so many levels. good too see you here posting as well. Goodluck in the contest, im sure you will do very well. Sending you light always
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Ayesha Iqbal
Date: 12/6/2023 8:12:00 AM
Aww you are too kind dear Ink... thank you so much for your beautiful review!! Sending light and love your way always!
Date: 12/5/2023 3:22:00 AM
How beautiful it would be to see a rose in winter, but flowers are fragile and most of them do not last after summer... this is a very good take on the contest with so many lovely lines... nice colours and imagery.. Good luck in the contest.
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Ayesha Iqbal
Date: 12/6/2023 8:11:00 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback!!
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