Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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27.11.2023
Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Winter Sonata -

                                          Electrifying chords,
                                       searching tones of love
                                     with overflowing devotion
                                           Fate was present
                                          created vibrations
                                  Double footprints in the snow
                                          Winter explosion in
                                            the crystal vase
                                        powdered, ivory roses

                                          He stole my breath
                                        when our lips collided
                                           without hesitation
                                            Looking at him – 
                                      through frozen eye lashes
                                          Out of control from
                                          a thousand shivers
                                          just a few seconds

                                              Is it possible 
                                        to open up all the locks
                                            where uncounted
                                            of white snowflakes
                                                 are stored
                                         Ready to sing a sonata 
                                      without a particular reason

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Kim Rodrigues November 29, 2023 at 8:55 AM Double footprints in the snow Winter explosion in the crystal vase…very nice, dear poet!

Frederic Parker November 28, 2023 at 4:16 PM as a poet who writes romantic poetry, this one touched my heart dear poet

Eve Roper November 28, 2023 at 8:32 AM the imagery of snow through foot prints in the snow , a kiss and frozen eyelashes, stunning sonata ready to sing... Lovely write.

Ink Empress November 28, 2023 at 7:05 AM Wow this is absolutely gorgeous, how soul warming can a winter sonata sound youve shown that through your descriptive imagery and depth of emotions woven here in such creative manner. Eloquent write this is and i love ivory roses and the opening lines here too stood out for me. Picture goes so well with your word weaving, goodluck in the contest dear anne lise

Jerry Brotherton November 28, 2023 at 5:54 AM The warmth of love can shield you from the harshness of winter. A wonderfully romantic poem my friend. Anne-Lise Andresen November 28, 2023 at 12:48 PM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, Jerry :) - hugs

Malabika Ray Choudhury November 28, 2023 at 5:34 AM A beautiful, romantic sonata, Dear Anne-Lise! I always enjoy the he uniqueness of your poems. hugs ~ Anne-Lise Andresen November 28, 2023 at 12:19 PM - Many thanks for your comment :) - I really appreciate your kind comment, Mala :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit November 28, 2023 at 5:11 AM Beautiful, romantic. Much enjoyed the vibes of your poem, Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen November 28, 2023 at 12:13 PM - Vijay, many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs

Abdullah Alhemaidy November 27, 2023 at 8:18 PM Beautifully lovely! Have wonderful winter days & nights ~ AA Anne-Lise Andresen November 28, 2023 at 12:12 PM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, Abdullah :) - hugs

Daniel Turner November 27, 2023 at 4:57 PM A beauty, Anne. Lucky fellow:) Anne-Lise Andresen November 28, 2023 at 12:10 PM - Many thanks Daniel, for your lovely comment ... appreciate it very much :) - hugs

Tom Cunningham November 27, 2023 at 4:54 PM A very romantic if not chilly romantic verse Anne-Lise, huddling together will keep them warm. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen November 28, 2023 at 3:13 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Tom :) - I really appreciate your kind comment :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes November 27, 2023 at 1:36 PM Simply splendid. The warmth of your heartfelt words, melt ones heart as the chill of winter is depicted so clearly in this frosty sonata. A beautiful piece Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen November 27, 2023 at 4:15 PM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, S.V :) - Nice to see you :) - hugs

Sotto Poet November 27, 2023 at 1:17 PM Anne-Lise, your poetic creation exudes a tender and exquisite essence, adorned with a captivating choice of vocabulary. The profound beauty of your final stanza further enhances the overall artistry of your poem. Best wishes Anne-Lise Andresen November 27, 2023 at 4:13 PM - Winter is cold ... hearts need warmth, Las :) - Many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs

Silent One November 27, 2023 at 1:05 PM Love that last stanza...this is a tender and beautiful poem.. lovely selection of words.. Anne-Lise Andresen November 27, 2023 at 4:06 PM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, S.O. :) - hugs

Deb M November 27, 2023 at 12:38 PM Sunshine what beautiful love poem! Just lovely….Debx Anne-Lise Andresen November 27, 2023 at 4:04 PM - Many thanks Deb, glad you enjoyed it :) - hugs