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Winter Solstice Rondeau

Oh, Winter Solstice, when you first appear, the days are short upon our hemisphere. But as the Yule log burning through each night enkindles warmth and makes our season bright, the days will lengthen yet another year! The ancients celebrated, some for fear their God of Sun would fail to reappear. But then was born a “Son” who brought NEW light! Oh, Winter Solstice. And rare is one who, when his time grows near, (though winds may blow and weather be severe), refuses to take part in each delight, the fanfare and the feasts when we unite with loved ones. . . sing rejoicing, spread good cheer! Oh, Winter Solstice. For Deb Guzzi's Contest: Winter Holy Days (Celtic/Winter Soltice)

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Date: 1/13/2011 11:51:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Winter's Holy Holidays". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/12/2011 12:54:00 AM
unforgettable read; one that shines and really hits the winning records, andrea.. CONGRATS!! :) nette
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Date: 1/12/2011 12:30:00 AM
You have depicted this Winter poem very lively and brings family closer to each other in welcoming this cold season, a very deserving win and congratulations, Andrea. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 1/11/2011 9:30:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Andrea
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Date: 1/10/2011 10:10:00 PM
Many congratulations Andrea for this wonderful write and win.
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Date: 1/10/2011 4:00:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your amazing win in Debbie's contest with this exciting entry .. full of enjoyable info and beauteous lines to read.. enjoy another top ten success my friend with luv..
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Date: 1/10/2011 2:01:00 PM
Thanks for the contest entry [soup mail] Love's Ya
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Date: 1/10/2011 3:49:00 AM
A great entry for Deborah's contest with this interesting write Andrea, love Wilma
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Date: 1/9/2011 6:07:00 PM
Andrea--With this poem, you look at the event and find the beautiful heart (core). You have also left me a lot of comments for which I am deeply moved. The clapper is a great XMAS gift. You can google it, but it's been advertised on TV. I think I will get it next year to give to friends. They will probably enjoy getting it. You really do make me smile. Yes, I like to point out the foolishness of politics and the foolishness of hate and bigotry. Can I follow your example and be a beacon?
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Date: 1/9/2011 3:38:00 PM
This looks like a fine exampe of this type of poem. Deb should give you some good consideration in her contest.
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Date: 1/9/2011 12:37:00 PM
Andrea, I'm not familiar with all the forms but regardless, this is a beauty and as usual, well-writen. Good luck in Deb's contest! Love, Audrey
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Date: 1/9/2011 10:34:00 AM
What lovely celebrations and festivities you take us through as we are entertained by your Winter Solstice! Good luck for the contest and thanks for your lovely comments today!
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Date: 1/9/2011 10:00:00 AM
A beautiful post-Christmas remembrance. Luck in the contest. Nola doesn't participate much in the soup, but with some encouragemnet...maybe? Love, Dave
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Date: 1/9/2011 8:40:00 AM
Enjoyed much the read of your poem, Andrea! Beatifully expressed! And best of luck in Debbie's contest! Love, Gert
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Date: 1/9/2011 7:18:00 AM
such lilting praise for a celtic holiday, andrea... you weave such magic!! my best winning wsihes in the contest!! admirable!! :) nette
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Date: 1/9/2011 6:33:00 AM
You haven chosen a nice holiday of Solstice that happens twice in a year with a take on the faith. Andrea
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Date: 1/9/2011 5:28:00 AM
Good luck in the contest with this sure winner..Thanks for stopping by my blog..Phyllis is going to Atlanta today to bring our son home..The prediction of the winter storm has brought his homecoming a day early..Sara
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Date: 1/9/2011 2:56:00 AM
Your "Rondeau" is perfect ! Your ryhmes on target, as your refrains ! Beautiful write here dear poet; I don't know Debbie's rules for the contest, but, being the winter guy that I am, I give it a 10 ! much love, james P>S...soup mail on "Prose poetry" verses, "Free verse" in a minute.
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Date: 1/9/2011 2:21:00 AM
A great piece for the contest,Andrea.Winter gets up revived.......
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Date: 1/9/2011 12:29:00 AM
This should be among the top in this contest, very nice, lovely natural rhyming. Good luck
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Date: 1/8/2011 5:36:00 PM
A beautiful entry in the contest.Goodluck Andrea-kashinath
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Date: 1/8/2011 3:09:00 PM
Nice poem. Good luck in the contest. Jimmy
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Date: 1/8/2011 3:04:00 PM
I like the way you described how a "Son" brought new light to the world, Andrea. Best wishes for success in Deb's contest, Carolyn
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Date: 1/8/2011 2:42:00 PM
I have been reading some wonderful poems for Deb's contest!!! She will love your Rondeau!! I do too !! (hey...I rhymed!! :)
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Date: 1/8/2011 2:42:00 PM
lovely....wish I could write as tellingly as this....very likely to be the winner.....good luck....Syd
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