Winter Solstice

Come, let us celebrate the shortest day
And longest night: midwinter, even though
The coldest times are still to come. We pause
For a brief moment, like the sun, before
He turns his path. From deepest raven dark,
From lowest ebb, the tide now turns to rise
Towards the light. The solstice fires burn.
Let flames devour what burdens you and weighs
Your spirit down, then lighter and with joy
We shall prepare for new beginnings and
The ancient promise of unconquered sun,
As we ascend to a new fruitful year.


December 3, 2016
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Gauthier Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 8:45 AM
Well penned, Agnes.
Haight Avatar
December 11, 2016 at 7:52 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win, Agnes! Hugs, Sandra
Canerdy Avatar
December 10, 2016 at 10:53 PM
Agnes, this is beautiful. Congrats on your win! Janice
Krampe Avatar
December 11, 2016 at 7:56 AM
Thank you, Janice.
Burch Avatar
December 10, 2016 at 9:45 PM
Congrats Agnes!! Well done!!! Big Hugggs!Deb
Krampe Avatar
December 11, 2016 at 7:56 AM
Thanks, Deborah.
Haight Avatar
December 10, 2016 at 3:36 PM
A wonderful poem, Agnes! Our days will be the shortest soon and then the pendulum swings the other way. However, I also enjoyed the metaphors in your lovely write. Congrats on your placement in the Premiere Contest. Hugs, Sandra
Krampe Avatar
December 10, 2016 at 6:13 PM
Thank you very much, Sandra.
Vinson Avatar
December 10, 2016 at 2:53 PM
:: applause :: Right on, Agnes, and who would believe it: 2017. <~~What is THAT? Impossibly, we are almost there. Many people from back through the ages applaud you too.
Krampe Avatar
December 10, 2016 at 6:12 PM
Thanks, Doug.
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 10, 2016 at 12:59 PM
I am wrapped in the warmth of your words, like being near a cozy fire on a snowy night. Beautiful Agnes, just beautiful! An inspiration for the coming year! 7 ; )
Krampe Avatar
December 10, 2016 at 6:12 PM
Thank you so much, Connie.
White Avatar
December 10, 2016 at 12:56 PM
Yuletide :) Solstice, yes. I love the description, the picture, everything.
Krampe Avatar
December 10, 2016 at 6:12 PM
Thanks, Darren.
Onclaud Avatar
December 4, 2016 at 11:59 AM
how radiant, agnes... yes, i'm spellbound by this write.. huggs
Krampe Avatar
December 4, 2016 at 1:56 PM
Thank you so much, nette.
Ball Avatar
December 3, 2016 at 10:13 PM
Very nice Agnes. So well thought out and put together. We finally got the snow that stays here. It was late coming this year. We usually have it by Halloween but this year it didn't get here until the very last day of Nov. Great job. Good luck on the contest. God Bless, JB
Krampe Avatar
December 4, 2016 at 1:56 PM
Thanks for stopping by, Judy, and for your kind comment.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 3, 2016 at 7:43 PM
I am enjoying these contest entries. A lovely write.
Krampe Avatar
December 4, 2016 at 1:55 PM
Thanks, Richard.
Turner Avatar
December 3, 2016 at 6:55 PM
Very nice, Mrs Agnes. I love the lines,"Come let us...still to come. Well done:)
Krampe Avatar
December 4, 2016 at 1:55 PM
Thank you, Daniel.
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December 3, 2016 at 6:38 PM
Beautiful piece!
Krampe Avatar
December 4, 2016 at 1:54 PM
Thanks, Mike.
Allison Avatar
December 3, 2016 at 5:41 PM
lovely uplifting poem Agnes:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Krampe Avatar
December 3, 2016 at 5:55 PM
Thank you, Jan. I love the winter solstice and all it symbolizes.
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