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November- 14- 2025

A Fall or Winter Nature Haiku Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Tania Kitchin


 

winter snow

first snow lies around
   like a clean laundered white dress~
      chill bites into flesh
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Kendrick Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 7:48 AM
Very apt descriptions. Snow seems far away right now, but I know it will come again. Thank you for sharing this creative one with us. Sara K.
Dietrich Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 11:52 AM
Oh I like this s lot!
Poet Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 8:48 AM
Delicate whispers, a serene hush of winter's breath. Wishing you the utmost success with the contest.
Buhagiar Avatar
November 18, 2025 at 11:53 AM
Marvellous imagery. I can feel the cold.
Banerjee Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 10:23 PM
I absolutely love the imagery! Already a winner in my eyes, Valsa! All the luck :)
Winter Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 6:48 PM
This is what a brilliant haiku truly is! Wow what a creative way to describe snow. I'm in awe :)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 5:27 PM
a beautiful Haiku, soft as winter snow. best wishes with this contest entry, hugs
Kauffman Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 11:12 AM
Dearest Valsa, this is a perfect description of as it cleans the world with its biting "chill." Images as fresh as a new snowfall. Best wishes for the contest! Warm blessings of joy to you, dear friend!
Goldsmith Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 9:20 AM
Your "winter snow" is a wonderful Haiku write with a pretty picture. "Good Luck" I did, "winter cardinal." Have a Blessed day/weekend writing away..........
Jones Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 11:23 PM
Love this! The second line is a beauty and fun to read! Best wishes dear Valsa!
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