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Winter Slush

I watched the snow fall As it grasped the tree branches It left a wonderland here I watched the rain fall As it washed tree branches bare The slush on the ground is deep Heidi Sands 1/13/23 Olaced 4th in The Winter Sedoka Contest. Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/26/2023 6:30:00 AM

I wanted to drop by to say congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/26/2023 7:02:00 AM

Tha k you Sara :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/25/2023 9:22:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. The trees with snow is so pretty just like this write. Have a wonderful day..............

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/25/2023 9:26:00 AM

Thank you for all your support Paula :)

Charles Messina

Date: 1/25/2023 4:40:00 AM

Oops! Heidi, I loved your poem. unfortunately, you had one too many syllables in " As it washed the tree branches bare" Thanks for entering my contest :) Con gratulations on your placement.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/25/2023 4:45:00 AM

I appreciate your kindness. I will edit it.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/25/2023 4:44:00 AM

Oh, sorry about that Charlie. Thank you :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/14/2023 12:19:00 PM

Dear Heidi, your vivid imagery captures winter weather in vibrant contrast. A beautiful poem, my friend. I do hate slush though, and the ice it often turns into. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Susan Ashley
Date: 1/14/2023 12:31:00 PM

Happy new year to you too, Heidi! :) Thankfully, all is well here and I hope all is well for you and yours too, my friend..

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/14/2023 12:26:00 PM

Hi Susan. Happy New Year. Thank you for the kind comment on this. Yes, it turned into ice overnight. I hope all is well :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/13/2023 1:17:00 PM

A pretty write about the snow. I bet the slush turned into ice. Have a blessed day.........

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/13/2023 1:51:00 PM

Thank you Paula. The slush is heading to turn into a lot of lumpy ice, yes. :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/13/2023 11:29:00 AM

Love the winter wonderland Heidi, hate that slushy weather as temps rise. Have a lovely weekend. Tom

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/13/2023 11:56:00 AM

Yes. Me too Tom. It sure is a sloppy mess out there today, but the sun has started to shine, right before sunset! Thank you :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/13/2023 10:19:00 AM

You conveyed a stunning picture with this Sdoka, Heidi. Both snow and rain are great poets' inspirations. Good luck with the contest

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/13/2023 10:41:00 AM

Thank you very much Sotto. I appreciate your support :)