Winter Senryu

cold city streets
ice crystals joining hands
slap shots on pavement


winter’s whiskey
nips in a snow storm
staggering snow men


shovels at rest
tea cups warm winter’s hands
puddles on the floor

John G. Lawless
©2/7/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Krutsinger Avatar
February 27, 2022 at 3:43 PM
I liked this the best "winter’s whiskey nips in a snow storm staggering snow men"
DiMino Avatar
February 7, 2022 at 11:10 AM
Wonderful imagery, John; "winter’s whiskey nips in a snow storm staggering snow men" Outstanding! Joe.
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