Sotto Poet Poet Haiku

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Winter Season Musings Haiku Chain

rush hour five o'clock
hands clinging to a milestone
bus smash up victim

Observe the iced twigs.
trembling in cold winter wind
as they didn't have mitts

winter's crowning gloat
Chandeliers of ice crystals
Melt away slowly

the fireplace burns wood
There are seeds beneath the snow
tonight,  dream of spring


Written; November 13, 2021

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Evelyn Judy Buehler November 15, 2021 at 8:21 PM Your haiku is engaging and lovely, Lasaad. Your imagery is always so pleasing. :)

Sara Kendrick November 15, 2021 at 1:54 PM The seeds dreaming of spring and most every person and animal are dreaming as well. I enjoyed reading these Haiku today. Your visit to my page was delightful. Sara

Delice Arleen Skelly November 14, 2021 at 3:30 AM Lasaad, I enjoyed your thoughts of winter...Delice Sotto Poet November 14, 2021 at 5:57 AM Thanks for your kindness, Delice. Have a safe weekend

Tom Cunningham November 14, 2021 at 2:00 AM Great imagery Lasaad, I'm already looking forward to spring and winter is far from over. Tom Sotto Poet November 14, 2021 at 5:55 AM Thanks, dear friend Tom; indeed, we didn't make it through the winter with his frigid shivers and ice rain; I'm hoping for a quick transition to spring.

Michelle Faulkner November 13, 2021 at 9:42 PM I am swept away again by your profound imagery, my favorite here is 'Chandeliers of ice crystals' - wintertime can be dangerous but also beautiful - Sotto Poet November 14, 2021 at 5:56 AM Thanks for your kindness, Michelle. Have a safe weekend