Winter Poems Ii - Waiting For the Snow

We lived in shoeboxes 
Where the full moon didn’t show
Jerked beneath blankets and the night
Waiting for the snow.

Mother sewed for coins
Through squinted eyes, blind tears
When she slept we added more stitches
Embroidered in our fears.

It was always winter
In our tile of world caught in the pane
We taught the babies how to pray
The stories kept us sane.

One day the stitching stopped
Why was she crying, we didn’t know
I cannot see. She could not see
So we waited for the snow.


2010.10.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Gi-Sa Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 3:18 PM
Great poem!
A  Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 6:52 PM
Like the ending
Dietrich Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 10:00 AM
My goodness, so sad and so touching. this is deliciously beautiful writing. Congratulations in the contest, Grace. LUv, Andrea
Muzzey Avatar
October 30, 2010 at 10:20 AM
Congratulations on your ninth place win with this wonderful write, I truly enjoyed the read. Caryl
Roberts Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 1:09 PM
what a touching piece you have penned for us, congrats on your win in the contest
Fraser Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 7:47 AM
Many congratulation's Grace on your win in Constance's contest >> James
Sweetheart Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 3:31 PM
Congrats Grace on your winning poem in Constance's contest with this unique and creative entry luv.. enjoy a grand win tonight ..hope u are doing well luv.. enjoy ...
Devonshire Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 3:08 PM
So glad to see this in the winners' circle, Grace. Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Love, Carolyn
Johnson Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 1:12 PM
And I am sure there is much more to this story. Congratulations on win. Love, Joyce
Mehta Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 12:41 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Grace
Brown Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 12:16 PM
Congratulations Grace on your win in Constance~The Rambling Poet's contest "Horses and Snowflakes". Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
October 23, 2010 at 7:07 AM
This is really beautiful, Grace, and moving. I love the line "Emboidered in our fears." The "stitching" seems to be a metaphor. Best wishes in the contest, dear! Love, Carolyn
Henderson Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 7:21 PM
Very delightful reading though I'm not getting some deeper meaning implied. I'm going to look for more of your poems. Charles
Bagnall Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 4:35 AM
intreaguing, very well written, I can feel the sadness, not really sure what's going on. Good luck in the contest
Culverhouse Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 4:16 AM
so sad, enjoyed reading our hearfelt poem!!
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