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Winter of the Heart

Bruised and beaten on the ground could have moved on stopped picked up your heart lonesome flower arms moved by compassion cradling it with ocean winds of the Spirit thinking would be all mine dancing for a while in walled sunlight two hearts synchronized in amorous delight feasting on glances of unending desires whispering to veins happiness then like a bud opening in secret beating of wings in silence of night departing jolt to love dream ecstasy in stupor yawning magpie needed to fly it’s winter now only for one heart arms outstretched waiting for gratitude to cross bridge at the return of violets in spring. Fifth Place Winner: Brian Strand-Contest 1292-3/7/24 First Place Winner: Brian Strand-All Yours-2/9/21 Sixth Place: Faraz Ajmal-Abandon II -7/25/18

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Date: 3/11/2024 8:08:00 PM
Dear Frances, your poignant poem is both expressive and impressive. A rich, deep emotional piece, a sad beauty steeped in soulful imagery. Congratulations for your win in Brian’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 2/10/2021 12:47:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 7/28/2018 12:25:00 AM
Back again to congratulate you again on your win again. :)
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Date: 7/27/2018 7:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this well written poem. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/26/2018 9:13:00 AM
A sad beautiful! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/15/2018 3:27:00 PM
Sometimes we nurse the brokenhearted back to life and sadly after they are fully recovered and have regained their strength, they fly away. Congratulations on your win for this awesome poem! Best regards. Pandita
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Date: 7/15/2018 2:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I like your phrasing, a sad poem... thought provoking. Well done! :)
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Date: 7/14/2018 8:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win and well crafted write . Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/14/2018 12:04:00 PM
Beautiful in it's sadness, congrats Frances on a fine placement!
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Date: 7/13/2018 8:49:00 PM
Frances, you write so beautifully. I adore your final four (lines)!
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Date: 7/13/2018 3:57:00 PM
Excellent poetry Frances..simply delightful poem..well written..charming words: I had forgotten you were a bird and needed to fly!
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