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Winter of Life

A lonely coffin, bleak and bare, with only undertakers there. The vicar, saddened by the sight, envisioned everlasting light, and prayed a lost and loveless soul could find salvation and be whole. She didn't care about the scene - and if the churchyard trees were green, or wintry branches, void of life - she only knew she was a wife, a mother, granny, aunt, and friend. The loneliness was at an end, and now with parents, siblings, pets, her tears were over, no regrets. The vicar turned and walked away; he'd three more funerals that day... written 2nd January for Emile's Winter contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 1/17/2021 11:59:00 AM
This sounds like something that is happening now, during a pandemic with so many people dying. Truly profound, Jack! A fave for me. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 1/4/2021 8:54:00 AM
How sad, how true, how agonizing and how we want this situation to change and this dreaded visitor, unseen, depart. Such a beautiful poetic write. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer Happy New Year to you and yours Jack.
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Date: 1/3/2021 7:08:00 PM
Wow, love this Jack, straight to the point with this gem of poetry...All the best for the New Year.
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Date: 1/3/2021 6:06:00 AM
What a deeply touching piece. Really deep emotion here. Great imagery. Excellent poem. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/2/2021 1:16:00 PM
What an excellent creative take on the 'winter' theme, Jack. For some, death is pain and sorrow, for others it is a moment of liberation. ~ Wishing you all the best for 2021. Regards // paul
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Date: 1/2/2021 12:25:00 PM
aww jack so sad and unfortunately it is a scenario we are hearing of more and more. stay well my friend and love to mum, hope santa jack brought mum lots of chocolate:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/2/2021 10:22:00 AM
Enjoyed reading, Jack. I wonder how many a day they did this year, sad but true. HugsEve
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Date: 1/2/2021 8:21:00 AM
Sad that death is so common at this time. I hope it will begin to slow down. Thanks for all the visits to my page. Sara
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