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Winter Morn Smiles On and On

Snowflakes are falling, enthralling this tranquil dawn, Adorning landscapes glistening withering green lawns, As snow-dust is zigzagging, whirling in fleeting storm Where pine trees are whistling on snow-covered hills Enchanting glamorous zeal of sunlit dawning appeal Sparkling frozen droplets on twigs of shuddering trees Glittering distant vistas, illuminating crystalline cliffs. Opaline arc of horizon scintillates in golden sun rays Sprinkling amethyst tints on flaming magenta blaze Refracting beams in puddles, glinting thawing streets As squirrels venture out, amid ambling human beats, When all-clear is announced by endearing birdsongs Welcoming, anew, exuberance of picturesque dawn Blushing visage of chromatic-morn smiling on and on. January 15, 2022 Placed 2nd: Winter Wonders Within Nature Poetry Contest Sponsor: M. L. Kiser

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/19/2022 3:21:00 PM

Very lovely, Vijay. Love all the imagery

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 2/17/2022 4:17:00 PM

Hello Vijay ... you have certainly written a nice positive view of a mid winters morning Vijay - Lindsay

Karen Croft

Date: 1/24/2022 8:51:00 AM

congrats on your placement!

Eve Roper

Date: 1/23/2022 8:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Vijay . Hugs and blessings for a better year in your life

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/23/2022 7:03:00 PM

"snow-dust is zigzagging", "squirrels venture out, amid ambling human beats" - Great scenes. Beautiful writing. Congratulations!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/23/2022 6:16:00 PM

I am very pleased to see she loved this too Vijay. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings xxoo

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/23/2022 6:31:00 AM

Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. It is very descriptive and expressive work. Your visit to my page was inspiring. Sara

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/23/2022 7:31:00 AM

Thank you Sara for your visit and comments. Much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/20/2022 1:24:00 PM

wow, superlative writing from you, my friend. I can see this as a winner!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/22/2022 8:39:00 AM

Thank you my friend--so special coming from you Andrea. Much appreciate, as always.

Michael Tor

Date: 1/20/2022 9:32:00 AM

Vijay you have skillfully written words that convey an imagery of winter that is transformed in ones mind. Words perfectly selected to convey this beautiful nature scene. Enjoyed reading, great piece...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/22/2022 8:38:00 AM

Thank you Michael for stopping by with your kind feedback. Much appreciate your visit and comments.

Deb M

Date: 1/20/2022 7:39:00 AM

Beautiful beautiful beautiful Vijay! That’s all I can say. Enjoyed. Debx

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/20/2022 7:44:00 AM

So very kind of you Deb. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Anil Deo

Date: 1/19/2022 11:12:00 AM

The last 4 lines again impressed me abundantly. You sharpen me for sure. Thanx/ Om, Vijay.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/20/2022 7:44:00 AM

Thank you Anil. Much appreciate your return visit.

Karen Croft

Date: 1/18/2022 8:39:00 AM

with all the detail i can imagine being there!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/18/2022 12:33:00 PM

Thank you karen--much appreciate.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/18/2022 8:16:00 AM

Enchanting writing amplifying Winter's beauty, my friend, Vijay! Much enjoyed! Blessings.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/18/2022 12:33:00 PM

Thank you my friend. Much appreciate and value your opinion, Demetrios.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/18/2022 5:55:00 AM

You have enthusiastically extolled the wintery wonders of nature with captivating imagery, Vijay. Well done! ~ Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/18/2022 7:53:00 AM

Thank you Paul for your wonderful feedback. Much appreciate your visit and comments.

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 1/18/2022 2:52:00 AM

You have literally painted an exuberant winter dawn with your usual exquisite style of creativity Vijayji...God bless...~ Ani

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/18/2022 7:52:00 AM

So very kind of you to say so. Much appreciate Ani. Many thanks.

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/17/2022 10:47:00 PM

Not only a beautiful rendering, but also a painting of exquisite nature.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/18/2022 7:51:00 AM

Thanks for stopping by Harry--much appreciate your kind feedback.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/17/2022 5:03:00 PM

With this one you take the chill out of the cold winter and present a very tranquil picture.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/18/2022 7:50:00 AM

Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/17/2022 5:29:00 AM

- You paint a beautiful picture of winter, Vijay :) - Winter is not "my friend" ... although it can be beautiful to look at :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/17/2022 6:01:00 PM

Winters in your part of the world are a bit harsh, I know. But like you say they are beautiful. Much appreciate your kind feedback, Anne-Lise. Many thanks.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/16/2022 4:47:00 PM

Oh Vijay, I don’t see how she could help loving this entry. Your winter landscape painting is breathtaking! I love this! Blessings xxoo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/17/2022 5:19:00 AM

So glad to hear that, Connie. Much appreciate your kind feedback. Many thanks.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/16/2022 12:19:00 PM

Snow dust is zigzagging…how lovely! Opaline arc of horizon and many more lovely images in your Winter poem, dear Vijay! This will surely be a winner!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/17/2022 5:18:00 AM

Much appreciate having your vote of confidence my friend. Many thanks, Kim, for your kind remarks. Always a joy when you visit.

Charles Messina

Date: 1/16/2022 8:43:00 AM

What a wonderful mindsight, Vijay. Pictured Perfect! Best wishes in the contest. Happy Sunday! Charlie

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/16/2022 10:59:00 AM

Picture perfect--is so special and a treat, Charlie. Much appreciate . Many thanks.

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/16/2022 7:40:00 AM

WoW! Vijay, You painted such a delightful” Winter” scene with your talented pen. Your lovely images just pop from the page. Excellent job. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day my friend:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/16/2022 10:58:00 AM

So special to hear that, Alexis. Much appreciate your kind remarks my friend. Many thanks.

Mike Gentile

Date: 1/16/2022 6:53:00 AM

Your Wintery images do not disappoint Vijay! Indeed, it is full of " Enchanting glamorous zeal"!! Good luck in the contest !! Happy Sunday1

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/16/2022 10:57:00 AM

Happy Sunday to you as well Mike. It will snow hear all day and night. Much appreciate your kind remarks, Mike. many thanks.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/16/2022 1:18:00 AM

A wonder of a poem, where one can distinguish all five senses. Then there's the imagery which makes a fabulous picture. The beauty of your poem astounds. Best for a win.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/16/2022 10:56:00 AM

So special to hear that from you Victor. Much appreciate your feedback as always. Many thanks.

Valsa George

Date: 1/16/2022 12:24:00 AM

How lovely is your pen painting of the lovely winter dawn . With your deft stroke of pen, every sight achieves a glamorous beauty..... so rare ! Win big in the contest dear friend . All the Best !

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/16/2022 10:55:00 AM

So nice of you to say so, Valsa. Much appreciate, as always. Many thanks my friend.