Vijay Pandit Poet Verse

Winter Morn Smiles On and On

Snowflakes are falling, enthralling this tranquil dawn,
Adorning landscapes glistening withering green lawns,
As snow-dust is zigzagging, whirling in fleeting storm
Where pine trees are whistling on snow-covered hills
Enchanting glamorous zeal of sunlit dawning appeal
Sparkling frozen droplets on twigs of shuddering trees
Glittering distant vistas, illuminating crystalline cliffs.

Opaline arc of horizon scintillates in golden sun rays
Sprinkling amethyst tints on flaming magenta blaze
Refracting beams in puddles, glinting thawing streets
As squirrels venture out, amid ambling human beats,
When all-clear is announced by endearing birdsongs
Welcoming, anew, exuberance of picturesque dawn
Blushing visage of chromatic-morn smiling on and on.

January 15, 2022
Placed 2nd: Winter Wonders Within Nature Poetry Contest
Sponsor: M. L. Kiser

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Andrea Dietrich February 19, 2022 at 3:21 PM Very lovely, Vijay. Love all the imagery

Lindsay Laurie February 17, 2022 at 4:17 PM Hello Vijay ... you have certainly written a nice positive view of a mid winters morning Vijay - Lindsay

Karen Croft January 24, 2022 at 8:51 AM congrats on your placement!

Eve Roper January 23, 2022 at 8:12 PM Congratulations on your win, Vijay . Hugs and blessings for a better year in your life

Christuraj Alex January 23, 2022 at 7:03 PM "snow-dust is zigzagging", "squirrels venture out, amid ambling human beats" - Great scenes. Beautiful writing. Congratulations!

Connie Marcum Wong January 23, 2022 at 6:16 PM I am very pleased to see she loved this too Vijay. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings xxoo

Sara Kendrick January 23, 2022 at 6:31 AM Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. It is very descriptive and expressive work. Your visit to my page was inspiring. Sara Vijay Pandit January 23, 2022 at 7:31 AM Thank you Sara for your visit and comments. Much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich January 20, 2022 at 1:24 PM wow, superlative writing from you, my friend. I can see this as a winner!! Vijay Pandit January 22, 2022 at 8:39 AM Thank you my friend--so special coming from you Andrea. Much appreciate, as always.

Michael Tor January 20, 2022 at 9:32 AM Vijay you have skillfully written words that convey an imagery of winter that is transformed in ones mind. Words perfectly selected to convey this beautiful nature scene. Enjoyed reading, great piece... Vijay Pandit January 22, 2022 at 8:38 AM Thank you Michael for stopping by with your kind feedback. Much appreciate your visit and comments.

Deb M January 20, 2022 at 7:39 AM Beautiful beautiful beautiful Vijay! That’s all I can say. Enjoyed. Debx Vijay Pandit January 20, 2022 at 7:44 AM So very kind of you Deb. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Anil Deo January 19, 2022 at 11:12 AM The last 4 lines again impressed me abundantly. You sharpen me for sure. Thanx/ Om, Vijay. Vijay Pandit January 20, 2022 at 7:44 AM Thank you Anil. Much appreciate your return visit.

Karen Croft January 18, 2022 at 8:39 AM with all the detail i can imagine being there! Vijay Pandit January 18, 2022 at 12:33 PM Thank you karen--much appreciate.

Demetrios Trifiatis January 18, 2022 at 8:16 AM Enchanting writing amplifying Winter's beauty, my friend, Vijay! Much enjoyed! Blessings. Vijay Pandit January 18, 2022 at 12:33 PM Thank you my friend. Much appreciate and value your opinion, Demetrios.

Paul Callus January 18, 2022 at 5:55 AM You have enthusiastically extolled the wintery wonders of nature with captivating imagery, Vijay. Well done! ~ Regards // paul Vijay Pandit January 18, 2022 at 7:53 AM Thank you Paul for your wonderful feedback. Much appreciate your visit and comments.

Anitha Jayasankar January 18, 2022 at 2:52 AM You have literally painted an exuberant winter dawn with your usual exquisite style of creativity Vijayji...God bless...~ Ani Vijay Pandit January 18, 2022 at 7:52 AM So very kind of you to say so. Much appreciate Ani. Many thanks.

Harry Horsman January 17, 2022 at 10:47 PM Not only a beautiful rendering, but also a painting of exquisite nature. Vijay Pandit January 18, 2022 at 7:51 AM Thanks for stopping by Harry--much appreciate your kind feedback.

M. L. Kiser January 17, 2022 at 5:03 PM With this one you take the chill out of the cold winter and present a very tranquil picture. Vijay Pandit January 18, 2022 at 7:50 AM Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 17, 2022 at 5:29 AM - You paint a beautiful picture of winter, Vijay :) - Winter is not "my friend" ... although it can be beautiful to look at :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit January 17, 2022 at 6:01 PM Winters in your part of the world are a bit harsh, I know. But like you say they are beautiful. Much appreciate your kind feedback, Anne-Lise. Many thanks.

Connie Marcum Wong January 16, 2022 at 4:47 PM Oh Vijay, I don’t see how she could help loving this entry. Your winter landscape painting is breathtaking! I love this! Blessings xxoo Vijay Pandit January 17, 2022 at 5:19 AM So glad to hear that, Connie. Much appreciate your kind feedback. Many thanks.

Kim Rodrigues January 16, 2022 at 12:19 PM Snow dust is zigzagging…how lovely! Opaline arc of horizon and many more lovely images in your Winter poem, dear Vijay! This will surely be a winner! Vijay Pandit January 17, 2022 at 5:18 AM Much appreciate having your vote of confidence my friend. Many thanks, Kim, for your kind remarks. Always a joy when you visit.

Charles Messina January 16, 2022 at 8:43 AM What a wonderful mindsight, Vijay. Pictured Perfect! Best wishes in the contest. Happy Sunday! Charlie Vijay Pandit January 16, 2022 at 10:59 AM Picture perfect--is so special and a treat, Charlie. Much appreciate . Many thanks.

Alexis Y. January 16, 2022 at 7:40 AM WoW! Vijay, You painted such a delightful” Winter” scene with your talented pen. Your lovely images just pop from the page. Excellent job. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day my friend:-) Alexis Vijay Pandit January 16, 2022 at 10:58 AM So special to hear that, Alexis. Much appreciate your kind remarks my friend. Many thanks.

Mike Gentile January 16, 2022 at 6:53 AM Your Wintery images do not disappoint Vijay! Indeed, it is full of " Enchanting glamorous zeal"!! Good luck in the contest !! Happy Sunday1 Vijay Pandit January 16, 2022 at 10:57 AM Happy Sunday to you as well Mike. It will snow hear all day and night. Much appreciate your kind remarks, Mike. many thanks.

Victor Buhagiar January 16, 2022 at 1:18 AM A wonder of a poem, where one can distinguish all five senses. Then there's the imagery which makes a fabulous picture. The beauty of your poem astounds. Best for a win. Vijay Pandit January 16, 2022 at 10:56 AM So special to hear that from you Victor. Much appreciate your feedback as always. Many thanks.

Valsa George January 16, 2022 at 12:24 AM How lovely is your pen painting of the lovely winter dawn . With your deft stroke of pen, every sight achieves a glamorous beauty..... so rare ! Win big in the contest dear friend . All the Best ! Vijay Pandit January 16, 2022 at 10:55 AM So nice of you to say so, Valsa. Much appreciate, as always. Many thanks my friend.

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