Thomas Wells Poet Haiku

Winter Moon

                                            Shiver shimmer orb.
                                    Waxing crescent, then frozen.
                                         Night’s naked ghost eye.

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Christina Bowring October 18, 2023 at 2:27 PM This is such a well written Haiku Thomas. Love your choice of carefully chosen words. Really effective. Great imagery. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. :) Thomas Wells October 20, 2023 at 7:51 PM Thank you so much, Christina! Aristotle said that the sculptor sees the sculpture within the stone. I think the poet must also see the Haiku within the seventeen characters. Take care, Thomas. :-)

Brian Sambourne April 24, 2023 at 8:47 PM Your third line, Thomas skillfully pulls your Haiku together like a neatly threaded sweater. Original phasing to convey such a sharp image. Congratulations! Brian Thomas Wells April 25, 2023 at 8:36 PM Thank you again, Brian. I enjoy writing haiku. Be well!