Winter Moon

The man in the moon
pulls his collar up
around his chin
in the frosty evening 
and warms his hands
on the fires of Mars..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Richards Avatar
September 25, 2008 at 5:57 PM
Can't help but laugh at Vince's little joke!! Too cute.....and so is your poem! ~Carrie
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
September 25, 2008 at 11:57 AM
The fool, he should have put them on Venus. So much for choices. God Bless. Vince
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