Winter Melt

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Winter roll up your white blanket, I loved your snowflake kisses; And your pure beauty, I will miss you, dear white; But it is time to go. Spring lay down your rainbow carpet, Tree's put on your gowns of green; Bird's get busy nesting, It's Spring, Spring, Spring, Spring; Time for a celebration. __________________________ March 20, 2016 Poetry/Verse/Winter Melt Copyright Protected, ID 770-119-16 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Celebration, sponsor, Shadow Hamilton Fourth Place

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/6/2016 11:08:00 PM

Broken, Congratulations on your "Celebration Win." LINDA

Constance La France
Date: 4/7/2016 4:17:00 PM

Linda, thanks for the congratulations !

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/4/2016 8:03:00 PM

Love the way you imaged winter and spring, Broken Wings. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Constance La France
Date: 4/5/2016 1:44:00 AM

Sandra, thanks so much for the congratulations and hugs !!

Balveen Cheema

Date: 4/4/2016 11:53:00 AM

Haven't seen a prettier spring- laying down its carpet! Congrats Constance!

Constance La France
Date: 4/5/2016 1:45:00 AM

Balveen, thanks so much for the pretty and the congrats !!

Vladislav Raven

Date: 4/4/2016 10:42:00 AM

Hi Constance, Congratulations on your win in the contest. A beautiful, gentle write as i have come to expect from your pen. The imagery just jumps out at you as you follow the easy flow of the words. A supreme write from a golden pen. An excellent write as always Constance. A definite seven and into my faves. Hugs....Mike.

Constance La France
Date: 4/5/2016 1:47:00 AM

Mike, thanks for the congratulations, the beautiful and the excellent and the 7 and fav, appreciate !!!!!

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 4/4/2016 8:55:00 AM

BW, I always feel your passion when you write! Keep up the good work because your works inspire a lot people to write too! I'm grateful I'm that I've met a poet who writes amazingly! :) - HANS

Constance La France
Date: 4/5/2016 1:48:00 AM

Hans, thanks for the wonderful comment and the amazing, appreciate so much !!!