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Poetry/Kyrielle Sonnet/Winter Magic
Copyright Protected, ID 02-1621-602-07
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

Written, February 07, 2024
For the International Contest, Write a  Kyreille Sonnet
Sponsor, Regina Mcintosh, Judged 03/02/2024

Second Place

"Snow loves the forest and trees that he kisses them, sweetly, covering them in a white blanket, whispering, sleep my darlings." Based on a Lewis Carrol Quote A white swan in the falling snow, bright birds on the branches clinging; small birds twittering in a row, the winter trees full of singing. The cold forest wrapped in stillness, from tree to tree birds are winging; an eagle calls with a shrillness, the winter trees full of singing. And the white snow falls on and on, the birds shrilling like a bell ringing; oh, such a divine winter dawn, the winter trees full of singing. A white swan in the falling snow, the winter trees full of singing.

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Date: 3/3/2024 4:46:00 AM
Just beautiful. Congratulations and much love, God bless you always, love, Gina
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Constance La France
Date: 3/4/2024 5:22:00 PM
Gina, thank you so much for the contest, and my placement, and the compliment and congratulations, hugs, Constance
Date: 3/2/2024 7:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your impressive work with us. Sara K
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Date: 3/4/2024 5:22:00 PM
Sara, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment, hugs, Constance
Date: 3/2/2024 4:30:00 AM
Your nature is loved by me this morning. and so is your beautiful tender poem congrats on your win Constance, this is truly beautiful !
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Constance La France
Date: 3/4/2024 5:23:00 PM
Mystic, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congrats, hugs, Constance
Date: 2/7/2024 5:29:00 PM
just exquisite with flowing lines and soft rhyme scheme. I think Lewis Carrol would be pleased. Have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 2/8/2024 4:27:00 AM
Sara, thank you for the wonderful compliment, hugs and hugs, Constance
Date: 2/7/2024 1:01:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Winter Magic" write/pretty red bird. "Good Luck" Have a blessed day writing away....................
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Constance La France
Date: 2/8/2024 4:28:00 AM
Paula, thank you for the compliment, hugs, Constance
Date: 2/7/2024 10:59:00 AM
This is lovely.. love the flow and the imagery of the birds..
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Date: 2/8/2024 4:29:00 AM
Silent, thank you for the compliment, hugs, Constance
Date: 2/7/2024 9:54:00 AM
Beautiful poem
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Constance La France
Date: 2/8/2024 4:29:00 AM
Jay, thank you for the compliment, hugs, Constance

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