Winter Magic

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Poetic Form: Monorhyme
Inspired: 2024 January 14

*3rd Place*
Winter Magic - 8-12 Lines of Rhyme
Contest Judged: 2024 January 15
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

Image: Snowmelt by Treehugger

What Is Snowmelt, and Why Is It Important?

Glimmers of glazed frosting levels, enticing blissful specials, scatters the blues of blue devils, encased sailing vessels. Rejuvenating windswept fresh, limb held chirping bird thresh, ever-changing flourishing mesh, awaken breaths gooseflesh. Spectacular melting winter, beautician scene tinter, the wood cord, no logs, just splinter, skier last day sprinter.

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Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 1/16/2024 7:45:00 AM

Lovely writeni simple adored reading your work.

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/16/2024 8:59:00 AM

An admirable shared joy, Yolanda. Blessings, my friend. Aloha, William

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/15/2024 7:12:00 AM

William, a lovely winter poem, congratulations on your winning placement!

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/15/2024 7:31:00 AM

Thanks, Tania, appreciate it. Aloha, Willima

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/14/2024 2:52:00 PM

wow, just wow! totally captivating and I felt like I was on a snowy moutain feeling the breeze and seeing all kinds of colorful details...maybe I was skiing, too. Lovely write.

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/14/2024 3:29:00 PM

The last entry 02/17/23 when I went amiss, was winter type of contest by Tania. Today, I was entry #35--just made it. Thanks, Sara, Aloha, William