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*Image of Man Woman Winter by Pixabay. Winter Love: Lovers Lore Fables apiece advents the quirky whiteness, mingling amidst a dreamt sea of ice, a transient couple transcends ..., Our eyes traced a bevy of cooing doves, creamy emissaries that solicit the air, cradled bears in their cavernous slumber, grasp we the contrasts of a winter's value respectfully shared. Rallies we as hosts, incite smiles that tide a snowy bank to ensure the source of our delight, that essences glacial depth eternal. Pleasures us, our spartan sips of integral entities abject icy approach, belittles none of those concerns for our hearts warms in oneness. The bleakness of grey chances upon the milky frost, but our tidings of gladness gave it no shroud. Our love inscribed upon volumes stretches to starry reach, it burst in sparkled splendor, earthbound, tendered as a shower of distinguishable snowflakes. Danced we, isolated from music yet winter's blast tunes the air, still, e'er so soft our labyrinths whims harmonious melody. Jigged we to a two-stepped-hop, choreographed to frigid-freed heartbeats. 2022 February 18 *1st Place* A BRIAN STRAND 1090 ~~Brian Strand: Judged 2022 March 17 *1st Place* Winter Love ~~JCB Brul: Judged 2022 February 25

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/17/2022 10:00:00 PM

"Our love inscribed upon volumes stretches to starry reach" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/17/2022 10:04:00 PM

Nicely picked highlight, Christuraj, your expressions are welcomed my friend, Aloha~William

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/26/2022 1:56:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write and picture. Spring will be here soon. Have a great/blessed day..................

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/26/2022 2:24:00 PM

Dutiful, Paula, truly a wondrous quality, and your day be equally so, Aloha~William!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/25/2022 5:39:00 PM

An unforgettable winter vision of love William. Congratulations on your deserving First Place win. Blessings xxoo

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/25/2022 7:04:00 PM

Visitors kept me at bay, Connie, with sincerity and notable compliments, be in righteous order -- true, ne'er they'd be two alike, Snowflakes -- CHEERS, Aloha~William!

Valsa George

Date: 2/20/2022 1:08:00 AM

"Our love inscribed upon volumes stretches to starry reach, it burst in sparkled splendor, earthbound, tendered as a shower of distinguishable snowflakes". ....Wonderful thought Hilo. Love in its sublime level....

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/20/2022 1:30:00 AM

Much appreciation of the outtake being a highlighted shared, Valsa, respectively my friend, Aloha~William!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/18/2022 4:38:00 PM

Hilo Poet, you paint a scene of love and romance. Aloha! Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/19/2022 4:25:00 PM

Hello Hilo Poet, Yes i have noticed the true value William. Aloha! Darlene-----.

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/18/2022 8:32:00 PM

I appreciate your noticing its true values, Darlene, as I'd hoped it to be, Aloha~William!