Winter Love

Bones creak with winter’s chill,
sledge trails cover the sparkling snow,
rushing like the wind in a barren landscape
towards a bleak lonely village far below
shimmering amongst the dark stately pines.
A teak grey sky domes over petrified trees.
Skiing hard, feeling an exhilarating allure,
hypnotic and unfettered despite the gelidity
as the cold breeze blows and moans into my face.
 
From afar a church bell tolls the end of day,
grey smoke twirls out of black chimneys.
There, in a homely cottage, you await,
a thick soup spreads its hot fragrances,
and thick slices of hot French bread
awaits my empty stomach.  I hunger.
Oh yes, I hunger for tasty soup and more.
I speed up for nothing can stop me now
savouring the thought of you waiting in a snug bed
and dreaming of you and a pair of lips so cherry red.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 12/3/2020 7:41:00 AM
So soft and sensuous Victor. A cold trip to love's warmth. :) Linda
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Date: 11/28/2020 11:29:00 AM
Though it starts out cold it warms up to a romantic ending...Very nicely penned Victor..
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Date: 11/26/2020 3:36:00 AM
A wonderful poem Victor, sweetly romantic with beautiful and vivid imagery!
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Date: 11/25/2020 2:05:00 PM
Hi Victor, You have penned such a good ” down to earth ” nostalgic write. The scene you created was nice and comforting. Well done. Have a wonderful day my friend :-)Alexis
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Date: 11/25/2020 8:56:00 AM
Good one Victor... great imagery too.. Have a great day ~ Ani
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Date: 11/25/2020 6:28:00 AM
Now thats a thought isnt it when we are cold and we can go to bed with someone who is nice and warm and hug them for comfort.. I feel warm after reading your poem..
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Date: 11/25/2020 5:31:00 AM
Your imagery, Victor, is always so delightful and you have no fear of sharing your emotions. God bless you, my friend! A fave for me.
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Date: 11/25/2020 3:25:00 AM
Such a sweet warm feeling your beautiful words evoke dear Victor and what a lovely cosy scene your pen has drawn mmmm... with kindest cosy thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 11/24/2020 11:32:00 PM
Enjoyed reading the beauty of the scene and the romantic feeling.
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Date: 11/24/2020 10:00:00 PM
I enjoyed the vividly lovely winter scenes depicted, and the beautiful romance, also. :)
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Date: 11/24/2020 1:15:00 PM
you always create such beautiful scenes that jump off the page and bring the reader into them... a little bit of sadness, a little bit of romance woven together perfectly into this wonderful poem... hugs
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Date: 11/24/2020 10:49:00 AM
Enjoyed your trek through the winter landscape and worth the trek for what Awaits. Tom
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Date: 11/24/2020 10:48:00 AM
- A wonderful love poem, Victor :) - Romantic ending :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/24/2020 10:41:00 AM
What a delightful picture. You skiing down the picturesque mountain with speed awaiting the wonderful treats of home. The ending particularly sweet!
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Date: 11/24/2020 10:13:00 AM
Great descriptive poem, Victor. I'm not looking forward to winter. I like soup during that time but prefer chili more :)
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Date: 11/24/2020 4:21:00 AM
Enjoyed the journey through bone chilling winter scene, Victor. As always you hold the readers' attention with intriguing details--I see him rushing for soup and much more.
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