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Winter Lake On Flame

A blazing pond is collecting golden light.
of the sun, tumbling in the Arctic sight.
similar to river rocks and evergreen coasts.
Close your eyes in your thick winter coats.

Knights swing ice spears without moving.
Fear of the ice crystals fueled the chasing. 
Light streaks straight toward death embrace.
The flood of plaster collided with still grace.

Heavenly laughter is steadily falling.
Rove rat-a-tat shoulder jingles are flat lolling.
Rain purifies the air and brightens the scenery.
Rainbow colors arise from a haze serenely.

Written: January 10, 2023

12 Lines Of Rhyme - Winter Nature Themed Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

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Paula Goldsmith January 25, 2023 at 10:26 AM Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. The picture looks so pretty/cold. I Love This. Have a great with blessings................

Linda Alice Fowler January 25, 2023 at 6:42 AM Another beautiful write from your talented pen Lasaad. Congratulations! :)

Tania Kitchin January 24, 2023 at 6:35 PM Lasaad, beautiful winter imagery, congratulations on your winning placement in the contest!

Sara Kendrick January 11, 2023 at 9:12 AM Creative lines for the upcoming contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Winter has a good hold on much of the USA this year for sure. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara

Vijay Pandit January 11, 2023 at 5:43 AM Lovely photo of winter lake my friend--your descriptions bring forth the images for the reader. Best to you, Lasaad. Win BIG.

David Kavanagh January 11, 2023 at 3:53 AM If a picture could speak a thousand words Lasaad, well no need you managed it in less than 100, and absolutely nailed it to the wall as well, brilliant writing and all the best for contest, cheers David

Valsa George January 10, 2023 at 7:48 PM The pond trapping the golden light of the sun is stunningly described with an apt image. Around it, rainbow colors rise. I can see this heavenly spectacle in my imagination.

William Kelii Kekaula January 10, 2023 at 7:17 PM A magical rendering, Lasaad, wondrously showcasing an instant of time, my friend. I'm glad to have this and Aloha, William