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Winter Knight Minichu

Through my chest, Winter slips Her chill as a coat of arms; Honed breathlessness— The whitest of white; milky touch— She has a warming heart's warning, As the frost dribbles out of Her clutch. Pass dark's storming Snow angels by morning Heavy ice flooring Through my chest, Winter slips— She has a warming heart's warning, Heavy ice flooring.

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Date: 12/3/2023 6:39:00 AM
Good idea for a minchu, I like the arrangement of words..
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Date: 12/2/2023 10:57:00 PM
Winter knight. What a brilliant title and theme to go for. I really love the lines “ Pass dark's storming Snow angels by morning Heavy ice flooring” so descriptive and creative how you paint imagery. As always its a pleasure reading your work
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Date: 12/2/2023 5:46:00 PM
beautiful - nicely said
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Date: 12/2/2023 4:26:00 PM
outstanding, Paige! Your images were beautiful. I loved 'whitest of white's milky touch.' The final verse grabbed my heart. Love this...have a splendid evening, Sara
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